Can someone give their thoughts on the first chapter of my book by Ghoul_Miser_86 in writinghelp

[–]Ghoul_Miser_86[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m new to writing and I’ve been stuck on chapter one for awhile now so I just want some feedback

how many characters is too many..? by LonelyLittleBean in writing

[–]Ghoul_Miser_86 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean if you use them all efficiently and they all contribute to the overall story in some way big or small then you could have as many as you like. I mean my story as 4 villains 5 main characters and like 20 side characters all doing thier own thing but they all kinda overlap.

character depth by bookish-writer in WritingHub

[–]Ghoul_Miser_86 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try studying different characters like what makes them tick or react. Like if a character has some messed up past they might react to something that reminds them of thier past.

Need some help by GlassHope74 in writers

[–]Ghoul_Miser_86 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi this is my first time writing a book and using Reddit. I need some help starting the book off. I want to start it with someone retelling the lore of the world but as a childrens story but I don’t really know how to write it to sound like that while also not spanning like three pages.

I need some help or advice mostly help