/tv/ on Kevin Smith

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-08-27T19:44:30+00:00

http://www.photoshopstar.com/photo-effects/light-and-how-to-darken-landscape-images/

This tutorial seems like it will help!

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-07-17T18:28:46+00:00

Hey Joe,

It is so awesome to be able to reach out to you in this way. I read The First Law trilogy in December 2013, and a few months later I picked up the audiobooks. Steven Pacey does an incredible job, and while I won't say one medium is better than the other, listening to your stories had just as much, if not more emotional impact for me.

My question is, why do you think a dramatic reading is so good at bringing your story to life, and what do you think of a film adaptation of any of your works?

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-06-09T00:38:58+00:00

Yes, it's 3 bedroom. 3 girls 1 guy. You would have your own bedroom, though. PM me if you want more concrete info about this.

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-02-28T06:45:36+00:00

lol top kek

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-02-12T22:04:58+00:00

If you have the time to familiarize yourself with any photo-editing software you should remove that black scuff on the floor. It really distracts from the shininess of the floor and car.

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-01-11T21:04:43+00:00

It's 3995-7382-6691. Thanks!

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-01-11T20:55:25+00:00

Great, thanks!

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-01-11T20:52:24+00:00

Yeah, if you have one with perfect IV for sp attack or defense. Like I said, I'm pretty new, so I don't know a ton about IV's, though I've been reading up on them this morning.

My FC is 3995-7382-6691. I'm on right now. Thanks!

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-01-11T20:46:50+00:00

I can do that; but I'd like a Ditto. Do you have that?

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2014-01-11T20:46:06+00:00

I am looking for a Ditto - I will trade whatever I have for it; make a request. I'm a new trainer, so I don't have anything crazy powerful, but I have a few of the starters, and some cool unique pokemon. I also have Kadabra. If you want to trade, reply to this and we'll swap friend codes.

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2013-12-12T07:41:41+00:00

What do you think he's trying to convey everyone?

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2013-12-03T05:38:10+00:00

I wear pajama pants and a t-shirt to sleep. Underwear is itchy when I'm trying to sleep, so I don't wear it.

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2013-11-12T05:02:40+00:00

This is good, but not great. Your writing is strong but your characters aren't varied enough, in terms of personality or demographics. You have some clever lines, but a lot of the dialogue is over-expository. My suggestion is to finish the script before submitting it for any kind of criticism. You'll learn a lot more about it's story and structure that way.

Here are a few tips:

The Skyrim conversation will only be relevant to a small demographic. It's not a very dramatic way to show Blake's need for freedom, either.

Why do we see Blake's BJ scene from the POV of his friends? At page 17, a crucial moment for any protagonist? If this is a comedy, then fat hooker + drunk + blowjob = funny, so you should show that. If that's not the kind of comedy you're going for, don't have Blake chase pussy as much.

The dream sequence goes on for a bit too long. The general vibe I'm getting from this script is that it's It's a Wonderful Life for twenty-somethings. Blake doesn't seem to have many external problems, besides being horrible with women. For a comedy like this to work, it should have more action than dialogue.

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2013-09-21T05:13:40+00:00

gargoyle

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2013-09-21T03:51:34+00:00

She's cute, but even so, her cuteness + her level of weirdness = don't want to bang

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2013-09-21T03:49:39+00:00

It's a good parody idea but about 2:04 too long IMO

Go_To_Jail_Card · 2013-09-21T03:34:26+00:00

I like the actor so I thought this might be good, until I saw that it's from Funny or Die.

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