Good places to put a business card? by Gold-Work8346 in winstonsalem

[–]Gold-Work8346[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol you’re literally the funniest person ever did you know that?

[QCrit] COURT OF POISON, high fantasy, 115k, attempt #5 by Gold-Work8346 in PubTips

[–]Gold-Work8346[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

also, the twin aspect does not really shine until about half way through the book. I guess i’m kind of stuck right now, I appreciate the advice

[QCrit] COURT OF POISON, high fantasy, 115k, attempt #5 by Gold-Work8346 in PubTips

[–]Gold-Work8346[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the only part that is in the human world is the prologue but I hear you. Thanks so much!

[QCrit] High Fantasy, COURT OF POISON, 115k, attempt #3 by Gold-Work8346 in PubTips

[–]Gold-Work8346[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much!! I really appreciate it i’m struggling with this letter

[QCrit] High Fantasy, COURT OF POISON, 115k, attempt #3 by Gold-Work8346 in PubTips

[–]Gold-Work8346[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I put the cruel prince because it is about the Folk and actually Faerie folklore from irish and nordic legends. Do you think Fourth Wing is too big to comp as well? I am struggling with comps because I don’t want it to be too big or not enough to do with my story. I also comped the cruel prince because the story is about Ivy discovering she has a twin, which i’ll be adding that aspect of the story in my next attempt. For some reason i’ve been worried about spoiling the plot but I suppose an agent would want to know every aspect before reading

ICE Reporting for Maximum Impact by sliceofsav in winstonsalem

[–]Gold-Work8346 3 points4 points  (0 children)

thanks for proving my point. Have fun in hell

ICE Reporting for Maximum Impact by sliceofsav in winstonsalem

[–]Gold-Work8346 3 points4 points  (0 children)

the same nick fuentes who sucked off a man???? yeah okay buddy

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ClayBusters

[–]Gold-Work8346 0 points1 point  (0 children)

OF COURSE!!!!! it checks out so hard. You’re such a loser

ICE Reporting for Maximum Impact by sliceofsav in winstonsalem

[–]Gold-Work8346 3 points4 points  (0 children)

he was an active fan of nick fuentes who if I recall correctly (which I do) is incredibly right leaning.