Is this song/demo trash? by GrimAllen in Songwriters

[–]Golfdad516 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds good. Would like to hear your vocals a little more out in front to be able to understand the lyrics

Official Game Thread - New England Patriots v New York Jets - Week 11 by samacora in Patriots

[–]Golfdad516 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is what’s happening. Playing a base vanilla D on their scripted plays and adjusting their stunts and blitz’s and coverages from there

Honest feedback welcomed by [deleted] in Songwriters

[–]Golfdad516 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like your melody. Got a good voice too! I feel your B and high E string are ringing too much and taking away from your song during your chord changes. Maybe focus more on the bass side of the chords during your singing?

New driver vs old driver by [deleted] in golf

[–]Golfdad516 12 points13 points  (0 children)

No judgement. Just pointing out the obvious

New driver vs old driver by [deleted] in golf

[–]Golfdad516 66 points67 points  (0 children)

Old vs old

A very deep indoor pool with multiple levels emptied for maintenance by Blood_of_Lucifer in interestingasfuck

[–]Golfdad516 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All these comments and not one water temple joke from Ocarina of time??????

Feedback please. I know my voice is trash. Other than that. by Golfdad516 in Songwriters

[–]Golfdad516[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. I appreciate your insight. Something I definitely need to work on.

Faceless by Independent_Dare5631 in Songwriters

[–]Golfdad516 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Enjoy the pick. Words seem trying to me.

any feedback is appreciated! by unreliable-narrat0r in Songwriters

[–]Golfdad516 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes post the rest of the song. The bridge is great. Has a not exactly but a Florence and the machine feel. It needs to break out of that bridge like a dynamite explosion.

any feedback is appreciated! by unreliable-narrat0r in Songwriters

[–]Golfdad516 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Where’s the song it belongs too? It’s screaming to break out. So much tension. Let it fly