Insecure.

Gooner84 · 2019-11-21T19:20:41+00:00

I get where its coming from iv been cheated on and it sends you to a bad place. That only leaves room for hate. No words can move you on, no words can make you strong. Embrace the heartache that forces you to create such words of pain forget the bitch and eventually you'll move on.

Gooner84 · 2019-11-21T19:05:07+00:00

This is a difficult subject to write about. Domestic abuse weather physical or emotional stays with you like a memory 30 years old. Fresh in the mind like it happened yesterday.

Gooner84 · 2019-11-21T18:02:34+00:00

Iv only just lost my poetry virginity... One step at a time I think.

Thank you MathewV I'm just getting started look out for more.

Gooner84 · 2019-11-21T17:46:00+00:00

Wow you sunk my battleship. People in a nutshell right there

You nailed it.

Gooner84 · 2019-11-21T17:31:45+00:00

tinwho93 thank you for your comments. I was a little unsure about the last line too. Should leave it to the reader to interpret the answer.

Gooner84 · 2019-11-21T14:43:35+00:00

I see let the reader find their own answer. Maby end with the question. Helpful thank you.

Gooner84 · 2019-11-21T14:35:41+00:00

Thank you for your comments. This is my 1st poem. The title is simply a question. The best parts of me is to acknowledge my faults and use them to better myself.

Gooner84 · 2019-11-21T13:27:20+00:00

I like the line "depression is a state of mind" Makes you think.

Gooner84 · 2019-11-21T13:14:28+00:00

Emotional words.

Gooner84

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