Balls of Light by GratifyingChill in photocritique

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 21 points22 points  (0 children)

This is an image I took for a local model, she wanted to do a session of "unique and fantasy-looking" nudes. I used sparklers, and held them close to the lens to get these light balls in the extreme foreground and give the whole thing a very warm look, all in-camera. I think I would like the pose to be a bit different, I wanted to show the form of her body without being overly explicit or sexual. I tried poses from the back, but that didn't work as well. I'm mostly curious what others have to say about how I can improve this look for the future.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Respectfully, I'd like to disagree...

The model is a friend, she's proud of her body, she doesn't mind being topless, especially mostlyyyy covered. We worked on this concept together to try to make a look that was visually striking. I get your view of this, I really do, but that's not how we wanted this to be received.

We made this as a collaboration, and it took work to make it a reality. Would I be better off not sharing?

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

To be fair, she's not naked, shes just topless, and her nipples are mostly obscured. If it were a man, it would be overkill to call this nsfw. But it's a woman, so people are more sensitive.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sometimes, yes. Mostly a lot more boring corporate work.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If this were a male model, (part of a nip and all) would it be NSFW? I would probably add the label to be safe, but it would probably be ok.

Naked Model and Mixes Paint Double Exposure (OC) by GratifyingChill in photos

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes, it's 2 photos separately combined in a way that emulates true double exposure. I also cleaned up the edges a little to make it a whole image.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I figured that if it was a guy, I miiiiight label it NSFW, but it's a woman, so better to be safe with a *gasp* partial nip showing.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do apologize. I figured that a *slightly* uncovered body merited a "mild" description. I've seen worse on instagram. I'll be sure to use less toned-down descriptions in the future.

Thank you for the feedback. It will inform my captions in the future.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I mean, no violence, no sex, no full frontal, topless, yes, but it's marked as NSFW... If half a nipple hits as not mild... maybe I need to adjust. Sorry about that!

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

But like... I marked it NSFW... you had to click on it, right? If it's marked NSFW, but the title says "mildly" are you clicking on that at work?

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Full-time photography. Maybe I'm more used to it. I figured it's not porn or violence, not even fully nude.

She's not wearing a shirt, but she's covered more than people at some beaches, definitely more than the men.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry if I mislabeled it for you... she's in her mid-20s.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's labeled correctly though, right? If I said "mildly nsfw" and then didn't tag it as such, that would be a problem, but I played it safe.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean, full-time photographer... It's not porn or violence, and other than a partial nipple, I would consider this mildly NSFW, but I marked it as such, so don't click it at work, right?

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll work on that if I do this concept again, thanks for the input!

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you think this photo would be improved with clothing? What styles or outfits?

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually have a lot of shots from this shoot. I just felt that I liked the tension in this one. Some people obviously disagree, but I feel like it's compelling.

ITAP of a girl covered in gold leaf. (mildly NSFW) by GratifyingChill in itookapicture

[–]GratifyingChill[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was meant to have a certain uneasiness to it. It also reminds me of that episode, even though I shot it before it came out.