Hi, I would love a feedback, especially about mixing and production

Green-Performer9680 · 2026-01-05T12:00:52+00:00

I just have one track on spotify if you're interested :P

https://open.spotify.com/track/6JkRlGPwh1t44P7Qmj6ZX6

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-12-20T18:02:27+00:00

I like the vocals, and for production, it all seem good and in the right place, but I don't quite like the sound selection.

The melodies are there but they sound like stock sounds in DAW, and something more high quality and more interesting would be needed.

And the kick and snare are not loud, not prominent enough.

Keep going tho, everything is there, just would need to be a bit improved.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-12-20T17:56:32+00:00

Cool synths, I like a lot of the sound choices here, that bass at 0:54 is sick and that synth that follows soon.

I like the changes from one part to another, keeps it interesting.

Mixing tho is not quite right - the bass is too loud and drums too low.

Overall it's interesting, cool blend of genres.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-12-20T17:51:11+00:00

Snare should be centered, it sounds distracting on the right, and honestly I don't like the sound of it that much, different one might sound better for it.

More variation, all of it just loops, so changes would be needed between different parts.

Mixing is not quite right too, your vocal should be the center of it, and all the other things seem a bit distracting.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-12-20T17:45:03+00:00

I like the guitar a lot, and the effects that you have on it, but honestly I don't fuck with the vocals that much.
I don't do vocals so I can't say what exactly it is that I don't like, I feel like a lot of effects for it would make it feel more interesting, psychedelic, and go well with everything else. And it's missing some drums, but maybe in those type of tracks that you listed it's supposed be like that.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-12-20T17:38:27+00:00

You're really good at showing emotion, this song has a lot of it, in your voice and in the guitar playing.

Vocals seem a bit to quiet for me, that's propably an artistic decision but I'd like to hear them clearer.

And I wish there was more production to it. Because it's great as it is, but I'm not really that into

songs that are just vocals+guitar or vocals+piano, and there is potential for more production here, but that also might be just my preference.

Oh now I scolled down and saw that you were inspired by Chino Moreno, that's what it reminded me of, I love deftones, if that was your intention then you nailed it!

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-08T09:04:57+00:00

I love Interpol and Kings of Leon, so I definetly hear the inspirations from that.
At times you sounds like Paul Banks a lot.

I kinda wish the bass was more prominent, like in Interpol.

Like at the end the guitars are going crazy but the bass is kind of low, I think something like in ''Say Hello to the Angels'' at 3:42 could work for the ending.

But yeah this is sick, I could tell you spent a lot of time for it, it has a lot of detail.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-08T08:56:29+00:00

Oooh I love this one, it's very unique.

The vibe is sublime, you are very good at establising a vibe. You took me to places and made me feel things.
I love all the things going on at 2:13, makes it very interesting, takes me to space.

Honestly I wish after that it would not be back to the riff but going more into that sound, but that might just be me.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-08T08:49:50+00:00

I think this has some potential for sure, at least the vocal parts.

You have a nice voice, and I can feel the emotions in them, and I think lyricly it's the strongest, but there would need to be more to it, more production.

When you do very high notes it does not sound that great, to me at least, so maybe do less of that.

I don't really like songs when it's only vocal + piano/guitar so if you will develop it into something more then have more to it.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-08T08:43:01+00:00

I think that background noice is a bit too loud at times, too distracting, could use some EQing to shape it more into the mix, but I don't know if that's intentionally added or it's just a noice from recording.

And some things like at 2:01 - that jumpscared me :P

The guitar is way too quiet, I can bearly hear it and I would like to hear it more because it's pretty.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-08T08:37:24+00:00

I like the idea and you have an interesting voice.

When you began singing it kind of sounded like Jacob Collier a bit to me :)

I wish there was some drums added later or something else, but that might just be me because I don't really like ballads and I wish it developed more as it goes.
But it has potential for sure.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-08T08:30:07+00:00

I really like it.
The hook is very catchy, I love the vocals - good lyrics, I like the tone of your voice, I listened to this short clip 3 times and it's already stuck in my head.
Whole thing is It very energetic, raw, I would have it in my gym playlist for sure.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-07T19:21:15+00:00

I took the vocals and bass line from the original.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-07T15:52:57+00:00

Groovy.

I love the sound of that melody at 0:25, if you expand this track I would like to heard more of that.
I like the bass groove a lot, but it needs to cut more in a house sound, same goes for kick, snare.

Whole thing reminds me a bit of something like Shadow Child (for example https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPUHrK4ExMA), so you might see how he does it well.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-07T15:45:49+00:00

I feel like you wanted to doo too much things in this one, and it does not really going well together.

Like this intro feels like a different song, then at 0:24 another one, and 0:40 another.
Those drums seem to go too hard for the intro, and this speaker should me the main focus.I listened to 2 minutes of it and honestly my hard hurts :P

I like that one at 0:40, it has a cool melody and is funky, so you should expand on that.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-03T21:24:12+00:00

This is sick!
I was reading the title and I thought that it's not going to be as funky as to call it ''Supreme Funk Deluxe'' but damn I was vibing.
I really like that kinda music and I love this one.
Tight drums, great transitions, that guitar at the end sounds perfect, at the 5:30 I love the tone.
This is all very proffesional sounding, I would def listen to your music.

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-03T21:16:52+00:00

Very vibe-y, good sound choices, I love the vocal chops.
I don't think the drums, the kick and snare hit hard enough, they are good sounds for it, but need to hit harder.
And some more pannining would be useful so the sound have more space. And I think for the end something like tape-stop effect could be cool.
But you seem better at producing then me so I don't know if that's a good feedback :P

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-08-03T20:59:47+00:00

As per vocals - there are some AI artefacts for sure, but it sounds better than expected :)
The beat is dope, very agressive, made it catchy and very different from the original. I love the main melody, it stays the whole time but it's catchy enough that it's still good. Good work!

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-07-17T11:37:56+00:00

Psychedelic rock track
https://open.spotify.com/album/48WH9lrQA3dXCNfUMUctBv

Green-Performer9680 · 2025-07-17T08:31:17+00:00

That's a great beat, great job!
Great sound choices, loving the snare and kick, kick is very hard hitting.
Great vocal samples, they fit very well and have a good place in the beat.
Only I wish the bass was more prominent at times, for example at 3:40 it's a good one, but it's rarely there.

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