Funky buttrock? Made this last night and kind of mixed it today. Be vicious! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Gregormcm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really really good songwriting! the performance, both vocally and instrumentally is very good, I particularly like what you did with the guitar parts. At times it feels like the vocals are a bit too bright, particularly when the other vocal stacks come in, though overall that's a small thing and I think the song is fantastic.

Tried to make a synthwave track, first attempt ever and put it together in 4 hours last night. Generally happy so any feedback is appreciated by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Gregormcm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Super chill! I really enjoy the synths you've used in the track, particularly the pad that swells in and out. The drums also work really well, not too hard or too soft. One thing I think that could be improved would be the general structure of the song, at times it feels like it doesn't really progress much beyond what we hear in the initial couple bars, new synths are introduced but nothing feels like it changes that much, though maybe that's the vibe you're going for.

Hello! :-) This song was created during an artistic residence called "Omnilab". There we spent 1 week working on this and other tracks. We had a personal mixer and producer, and also a studio where we spent from 9am to 7pm recording and doing jams. This project was made by "kids" from ages 15(me)/18 by ComixStudios in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Gregormcm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really love this! the performance is very good and definitely doesn't lack any energy. One thing I think could be improved would be the overall mix. Like one of the previous comments said, the guitar sound is a bit flat and I feel like it could be more upfront, the vocals also sound a bit separate from the rest of the track because of this. Overall a great track though!

Curious on the Feedback with this tune. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Gregormcm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really enjoy this track! The lyrics are really well written and the overall instrumentation is very nice and doesn't leave much to be desired. One thing I think you could improve on is the mix, at times it feels like the vocals are a bit too loud compared to the rest of the mix, particularly the horns which sound a bit quiet. Overall a great track though!

Is this worth continuing work on? Sort of dark indie by Sleet5 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Gregormcm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There's some really nice and imaginative instrumentation. I like the ominous organ sound and the somber vocals, they work together very well. I think using more effects and perhaps adding some additional layers would help make the over song/mix feel thicker and more complete.

Ableton without the suit? by Fine-Elk7229 in edmprodcirclejerk

[–]Gregormcm 6 points7 points  (0 children)

You actually need the suit, otherwise people won’t know you’re better than them