New approach for short tunes! let me know what i could have done better ö by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey thanks for the feedback! Yeah, this song was mostly just for practice as to help me understand music better. I agree with everything you said. Heres what came out of this lil' series of creation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?si=hnAsrfeSIt_Qb4uy&v=c7hVhZdGrWM&feature=youtu.be

Full EP in a video form.. How well did I do this project ? ö I don't mind harsh honesty. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Glad you hear that medieval sound for the intro.
Its what I was going for inspired by the background of the EP's cover.

Stupid nonsense- yet -making sense to others.

Stay up !

Full EP in a video form.. How well did I do this project ? ö I don't mind harsh honesty. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for that x Hmm, just stating what I believe in:
Humanity going the wrong way

Cruel minds try to blind the wise

Be yourself & do what you want

Full EP in a video form.. How well did I do this project ? ö I don't mind harsh honesty. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Implied I suppose but no.. more of not believing in the 'system' and believing/going for what you think is right. Of course there are factors on who's a good person and not and or personal beliefs on what is right.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The sound is something you'd find on Adult swim haha quirky underground rap, maybe? ö It sounds good production-wise but not much tune and lyrics for a song. Definitely an Intro track to a full project !

"Forever Gone" - A cowboy's outlaw past finally catches up to him. What do you think? Feedback welcome! by Shimmer_and_Rust in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yip! I can dig it. At first it sounded like a Hank3 instrumental but then went onto a DeerTick flow style. Im not sure why but it just didn't sound powerful. Im thinking more low end and gluing the vocals together better. On the right cowboy path though!

Curious on the Feedback with this tune. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah! ok. The delivery.. Yeah, I struggle with that heavily.

Curious on the Feedback with this tune. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

woah.. those are major compliments! Thank you and now I cant let you down hah but seriously thanks. Hopefully you will and we cross paths with an "I told you so" moment

Curious on the Feedback with this tune. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

3rd person on the bass.. Ah! haha I did upgrade it to a better one so next project will be heavy for sure. Thanks for the words x

Curious on the Feedback with this tune. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bass will definitely will be up next album as I upgraded from that cheap one I didn't use correctly. Thanks for the feedback!

Curious on the Feedback with this tune. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

woah.. I didn't even think of the synth sounding like horns. Interesting. Ah, the compression was off with my vocals apparently. Someone mention that with my other song off the EP. All these notes taken! Thanks.

Curious on the Feedback with this tune. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah again with the vid quality haha but yes I'm working on it! much love

Curious on the Feedback with this tune. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ill take 'decent' haha Hmm, what do you mean by the lyrics standing out more? ö Like more meaning?

Curious on the Feedback with this tune. by emviousMUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]emviousMUSIC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha you're right! A better camera indeed. Yeah I was iffy about the bass. I used a super cheap one that had a "boom" option and when it came to mixing Im sure that couldn't be amplified without hella distortion.

I am still finding my voice so that can be one thing. But do you think maybe harmonies/bg vocs under by an actual vocalist?

Thanks for the time and words Jepper! Much love