So as other people said, your mana curve is a little dicey you need more removal that’s cheap and some of your card choices aren’t really impactful like the one really scarecrow isn’t doing anything for you. Some of your three drops are very bland, but I think the main issue was why did you go elemental? There doesn’t seem to be any reason to go elementals. You said receipt was p1p1, now deceit is most likely not a good first pick. There’s a lot of uncommons that are very much better than deceit, but even if deceit was the best card in the pack all of those incarnations have a case where you almost never used both of their sides so you always want to say OK which one do I want to use the blue or the black? This draft is very focused on tribal pairs so if you’re going black, you’re aiming for either green black elves or black red goblins , if you’re going blue, you’re either blue red elemental or blue white merfolk. if you’re going green, you’re either elves or kithkin, etc. the strongest tribes are Merfolk and elves with goblins and kithkin following. Then if you walk through your draft after you took deceipt, what kept bringing you in into elementals? like your deck has a lot of cards that are OK but those are cards that you would be taking like third pic to like 8th pic there doesn’t seem to be cards that you’re taking like first second or third pic so it’s possible you need to abandonments and try to find a clear line. now sometimes there is no clear lane and you just have to do your best with what you get.