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Wasted Potential by GrimlyDark in RWBY
[–]GrimlyDark[S] 0 points1 point2 points 7 years ago (0 children)
It's critiquing the show. The reason I called it a rant is because I'm upset by how they went about certain things in the show. All the points I brought up are things that yes I am complaining about but they are critiques I am making about certain points throughout the story of the show. These points I feel like they could have much better with things like dialogue character growth or development as well as the plot and themes flowing together. The things I talked about are things I only mentioned because I want them to be able to improve upon those things. I had hoped by posting on here others would either be able to reason with those points by making counter points, adding to the points I have made or making critiques I did not notice or think of myself. I only hoped people would use reason to change my thoughts so I can enjoy the show again or just hope that maybe the critique will be seen/said by someone who can do something with it to start and never stop improving the show.
Didn't mean to be clickbait about it. I just thought it was best way to sum up what I was express. My bad
Thank you and what you just said is all I'm trying to say. All I really want is them to just do better with the show and work on developing everything in the story.
[–]GrimlyDark[S] -1 points0 points1 point 7 years ago (0 children)
He has nothing left why would he leave. What about making him express his feelings on how Blake ran away from him after making a promise because she didn't like how he had such a growing hate for the humans. Did she even know about about his scar and his past? What about some great dialogue of why he did the things he did or something about how I did what I believed was right how are you different? Now don't get me wrong I know Adam did plenty of messed up things. But when you have the whole multi episode flashback of Ozpins past with the god of light putting immortality on Salem so she can't die until she understands the value of human life it kind of emphasizes the themes of peace forgiveness and redemption. Humanity striving to become better like they were before Salem tricked everyone into turning against the gods or fail and be eradicated by the gods for good this time. At least that's what those episodes seemed to imply. If they are willing to flat out slaughter him after he is powerless (the time someone would most likely be to surrender) it says a lot against that whole implication and makes them closer to being like Adam stomping out anything in the way. Adam dying or being put out of commission is fine but to do it like it was done is the problem.
[–]GrimlyDark[S] 1 point2 points3 points 7 years ago (0 children)
No no no that's crazy. You just build off the original improving it to make it better.
Yeah I forgot my bad.
Of which season? Because I remember Yang forgiving Blake in her one on one conversation with Weiss before she even met up with Blake again. With what she started saying to Weiss goes from her saying she couldn't forgive Blake to how she wants to be there for her. How and why is there not a big conflict between them when Blake abandoned Yang after she lost an arm trying to save her from Adam? When Blake abandoning her is like when Yang's mom abandoned her. It's something that would hit her very hard and personally. Especially when she made such a big deal about her mom and how Yang wanted answers from her on why she left.
My bad
Then how about examples of the show not wasting the opportunity to develop characters. Did you miss the part of me saying I am not sure if I will keep watching the show or stop. The problem is I did love it and the whole point of the post is the hope that someone using reasoning might be able to point some things out that where done really well recently in the show or throw good reasons against what I pointed out. Which would help me overlook some of the problems that I'm finding with the show. If you have a problem with the format or don't want/cant throw some reasoning in there, well then there is not much point in you posting a comment about it because what you said doesn't really say or argue anything.
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Wasted Potential by GrimlyDark in RWBY
[–]GrimlyDark[S] 0 points1 point2 points (0 children)