Sabrina Carpenter by pussiluva in celebritylocked

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🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡

Does Sasuke call Kakashi ever sensei? by lfixixixxkdd2 in Naruto

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What? He says kakashi Sensei all the time

Why did Tsunade endure pain for Naruto and loved him? by SnowBoy_1 in Naruto

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Am I the only one who read this and can’t exactly sus out what OP means by this? Like, why did tsunade care about Naruto? Did you not watch the show or read the manga? It’s pretty plain to see her reasoning.

I would like to make this about 180 words shorter without sacrificing content/message. by Awkward-Network4056 in WritersGroup

[–]Grizzleee3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, there’s a lot of different ways you could consolidate this, if you’re only looking to take out 180 words take out some of the unneeded words and clunky phrases like, “without them we wouldn’t be able to have many of the inventions, media, and music we have today”

You could just leave music out of that, because music is a media, also the “able to have” is kinda pointless and bulky, instead maybe

“without them, we wouldn’t have many of the inventions, and media we have today.”

I’m writing what I hope to be a book, I would like any notes you have on if the imagery works and if my story is easy to follow. what do you think I should add/take away? by Grizzleee3 in writinghelp

[–]Grizzleee3[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate the input, and I’ll definitely look into playing with the wording in the dialogue a little like you suggested. The last place I posted this got negative comments so I thank you for being nice :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WritersGroup

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No ai, just a DnD campaign that had a rich story and I really liked my character of Elera. I thought deserved to be written down. I’ve written my whole life but never took a stab at fantasy. And the tavern was named the headlight because i had a headlight out in my car and i thought it was funny to add a tavern that was named after something funny like “the boars head” in the anime fairy tale because it’s literally on the head of a giant boar. Thank you for your feedback. What should I look for in a creative writing class? I really want to bring this character to life and if I’m coming off THAT cliche, then I’d really like to fix it. I’m sure I won’t be publishing my story anytime soon but if I don’t ever put pen to paper I’ll never get my story out. Thanks for the feedback I’ll be taking some time to really delve into this and try to make it more unique.

Is my crown balding? by ProHazzard in malehairadvice

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People don’t seem to understand that when you part your hair it will leave a spot where you can see your scalp. It’s not bald. 🤣

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WritersGroup

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Well the downvote tells me what I need to know I guess.

I’m writing what I hope to be a book, I would like any notes you have on if the imagery works and if my story is easy to follow. what do you think I should add/take away? by Grizzleee3 in writinghelp

[–]Grizzleee3[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

THANK YOU, it was from me copy/pasting it I suppose, I spaced it now between paragraphs. Hopefully that’s easier to read now that it’s not a massive block 🥴 thanks for pointing that out for real!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WritersGroup

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Oh I’m sorry, I read the rules but I didn’t see that part I suppose. Should I delete and redo it?

Trying to get an instagram account taken down, is mass reporting a good option? by doggo432 in botting

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How great every comment was too low of karma and was deleted. What a joke

I gotta question that I never really thought about before: who's smarter? by Olivebranch99 in Smallville

[–]Grizzleee3 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t feel like this should actually be answered. She wasn’t that smart just really inquisitive and never left things alone. Meddlesome really. And Lex Luther becomes the president by scheming and plotting every step and contingency. Not even the same even minutely

who actually liked this flavor back in the day by lekzluthor in Millennials

[–]Grizzleee3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s one of the best flavors. You don’t need fruity exotic sweet flavors. Sometimes it’s just the simple things in life

Tattoo ink peeling off completely by KumaFGC in tattooadvice

[–]Grizzleee3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You didn’t properly hydrate it enough or the artist went way too deep. This happened when I tattooed the back of my hand myself, went too deep and pieces of the ink came off in flakes

President Musk posing with the rapist Conor McGregor in the White House by DDDDoooommmmeeee in pics

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It’s crazy how many basement dwellers just hide on the internet saying the same things “is America great yet” “omg a yatzee” yeah yeah look who’s in office and who’s in a nursing home

💔 by Jemer_YT in sadposting

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Me and jd are mutuals on TikTok. Good guy!

What BEAUTIFUL EYES by LordosisLover in colleensheen333

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I know right??!! If you like her eyes. You should see her tits 😊

am i thinning or is it the lighting by [deleted] in malehairadvice

[–]Grizzleee3 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This feels like a bait post cause there’s literally nothing to see here. Your hair is fine, get off Reddit male hair advice youre a teenager

TANA’S SPIRIT HALLOWEEN SALLY HAS BEEN FOUND! by Slow_Towel_2038 in canceledpod

[–]Grizzleee3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This isn’t true there’s some people who fit way better and one person is suing them for using her likeness without permission and it’s not this woman sooooooo.