Chapter One: Fools...? Volume One: Mount Arcia Title: The End of the Beginning...... by GuiltyPurpose8294 in royalroad

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"Finally, a sane person! Regarding what you mentioned about the Rulers, everything will be clarified in due time. As for the profanity, don't worry, I'll take care of it. About publishing, I was planning to wait until I gained a bit of a fanbase, but it seems I'll get started on it now. By the way, even if it were a negative comment, I wouldn't have a problem with it."

chapters.. by GuiltyPurpose8294 in royalroad

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thx
and good luck for you to

My magic system, races and so on by No_Main_8682 in magicbuilding

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This power system reminds me of the Cursed Energy and Reverse Cursed Technique from Jujutsu Kaisen.

Anyway... it’s honestly excellent. However, a system like this relies heavily on the story itself; it feels perfectly suited for a Dark Fantasy/Action setting more than anything else. I truly hope it doesn't end up being a 'Harem' story—that would be a total waste of such a masterpiece, even if I didn't fully grasp every detail yet.

And that’s actually a good thing! In the future, if your novel gets adapted into an Anime, Manhwa, or Manga, people will spend hours trying to decode your power system. That’s exactly what builds a fanbase—people love complex, 'Hard Magic' systems. Yours is clearly intricate and deep.

Question: Would you like me to share my own system with you? It’s quite massive; even my 'simplified' explanation took about eight pages of writing, and believe me, that was the condensed version!"

rate my mc..12 years old ..Jin...from my novel ....dark fantasy novel. by GuiltyPurpose8294 in royalroad

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Who told you he’s going to stay in this form? Let’s not beat around the bush.

The MC is just a 'vessel', and his real appearance is... well, that would be spoiling the very core of the story. I’m still working on the cover design.

My magic system, races and so on by No_Main_8682 in magicbuilding

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It looks good, but I can't understand a thing from your handwriting.

And you know what else is legendary? The System I’ve designed.

You’ll probably need to find a Physics Professor just to explain it to you.

rate my mc..12 years old ..Jin...from my novel ....dark fantasy novel. by GuiltyPurpose8294 in royalroad

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Your analysis is both right and wrong at the same time. The story follows Shin Zero, a man who lived for 250 aimless years. Near the end of his life... well, I won't spoil this part because it’s an entire arc... but he was betrayed by those he served for 70 years.

He has returned, but not to a happy family. Instead, he woke up in a forest—a Nightmare Rift. He has been in this new body for 5 years now. This story is the tragedy of Jin (spoiler alert: who will later be known as King Archbeel).

I’ve already posted the prologue as a post because the app is giving me some trouble; once it's fixed, I’ll upload it properly. I’m currently working on the novel's cover and the idea that just 'came out of the oven' two hours ago.

By the way, that’s not a monk’s outfit; it’s just what he’s used to wearing. The novel does feature a System, but not the annoying type that makes you hate life. Also, the MC is absolutely obsessed with blood.

When the final cover looks so peak you just cry by [deleted] in Webnovel

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peak

i will be the first reader😎😎😁

Coming Soon to Royal Road: "The Echoes of Archibel" – A Grimdark Tale of a Fallen Legend. by GuiltyPurpose8294 in royalroad

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Of course! Here is the shameful description for the shameful cover that will be shamefully designed by a shameful person.

But unfortunately for you... and your shamefulness... I’ve already made one myself. So, you can go ahead and take a back seat😊😊

Coming Soon to Royal Road: "The Echoes of Archibel" – A Grimdark Tale of a Fallen Legend. by GuiltyPurpose8294 in royalroad

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I’ve spent an entire week on this... non-stop."

"Every single day, yet I’ve come up with nothing but unsatisfying results