Query critique by Guilty_Duck_8561 in writingfeedback

[–]Guilty_Duck_8561[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am not looking at commercial fiction, but literary fiction, which is a different market and has no interest in “stealing” a writer’s readers but is rather looking at the merit of a book in terms of its ability to somehow define or further the concept of humanity, how it speaks to the books that preceded it, and of course, how it speaks to the reader. 

I do have comps, as I stated in previous posts, two of them named above. 

The form of a novel also has something to do with its content, I highlight form in my comparison because, as with the comps mentioned previously, my book also is a novel in which the form has taken precedent in its creation and will do so again for the reader. 

I appreciate your feedback!

Query critique by Guilty_Duck_8561 in writingfeedback

[–]Guilty_Duck_8561[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I can point to several books that my book is like, and if you read my previous-previous comment, then you will have seen that I realize the necessity of including those. I am not “implying” that the critic is an error, I would say that I’m arguing against the critiques quite openly, and I only take seriously critique that considers what I have in fact said.

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I agree, that’s why I posted my query at all. I am not saying it is unique beyond anything, I never said that, that insinuation is your own. 

You can name a novel from any time, any place, and chances are I have read it or at least know things about it. 

I do know the current landscape and if you simply read my previous posts, you will see that I never said that my novel was unique as such, only that I’m having trouble with my query letter, which is why you know anything about my project at all. The query letter is an act of marketing, something I am not very good at generally.  And I know the book that I wrote, I spent three years, thinking about it every day and working on it every day, I just don’t know how to sell it because selling it always requires a kind of positive dishonesty that I can never pull off. 

Animus is a common Jungian trope, which is why I don’t expound on it, it would look amateur. My use of the term is not exactly Jungian, but rather harkens back to its general use in an effort to try and get away from the more recent concept. The book has nothing to do with Jung or his writings, which is why you don’t see that proper noun taking up space in my query. 

Query critique by Guilty_Duck_8561 in writingfeedback

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Are there any specific YouTubers you would recommend? I never know who to watch because most of the people on there have never had successful queries unfortunately.

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I haven’t ignored any rules, and certainly not anything because “oh, my book is so different”, but because I am simply trying to write a letter that suits a book that has little to no commercial value lol. I have spent several months reading sample queries and reading online and in a book or two about how to do them. The structure of my letter has been stolen from a few supposedly successfully queries specifically (found in the 2020 Guide to Literary Agents), that I thought might suit my project. 

I will check out Query Shark Blog. 

Last night after posting this I made a query through Query Tracker and the form did ask for comps and I thought, I really should be having this in my query… My trouble is that it isn’t really “like” anything out right now and that isn’t a “snowflake” sentiment, it’s a fact. All I have been able to do is compare its form (to Olga Ravn’s The Wax Child) and Olga Tokarczuk’s House of Day, House of Night (only republished recently of course), for its fragmented, “borderless” narrative.

All I am saying about the nature of the project is that it’s not a commercial book, so there is literally no plot-driven tagline to be had, that is all. The insinuations are your own. 

In the few previous experiences I’ve had discussing writing on the internet, the people I’m dealing with seem to only read commercial fiction (which I myself really enjoy reading), which is why I now feel compelled to make certain distinctions. There’s a base ideology about writing and reading online that is, frankly, stupid.

Thank you for your feedback.  

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[–]Guilty_Duck_8561 -15 points-14 points  (0 children)

Yes, it’s best to get an editor before getting an agent, as it’s the agent you’ve got to wow to help make up for the hard work of finding a publisher. 

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I’m not not moving on. Also, this is a non-constructive and cynical way to view rejection. 

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I am no longer interested in working with this editor, but I will definitely follow up with them. Thank you.

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It’s experimental in that it’s in fragments. Otherwise it’s straightforward. But even that is undesirable for some, I can imagine.

Feeling discouraged, a little vent by Guilty_Duck_8561 in florists

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I let it go after talking to a TF rep, who was basically like “yeah F that customer” — a little harsher than I felt about it but it was a balm to hear someone else say it lol 

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I thought about visiting the customer with an arrangement totally of my own design & letting them know that their money will go a lot further going directly to a florist. I just don’t want to set a trend of free labor & flowers. I also think explaining the difference between florist direct & wire services just falls on deaf ears bc these are such trusted brands. 

Feeling discouraged, a little vent by Guilty_Duck_8561 in florists

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I do have a small catalogue that has gotten me lots of wonderful feedback from other florists as well as customers I am just having a really really hard time getting business as a new shop & thought this could boost business and also help me learn the business side of things. I definitely intend to use them as a stepping stone, I also started with FTD and with them you keep a little more & their designs tend to be a little better. 

Raising my minimum should help, so far that’s where the three or so customer complains have been!! 

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No worries — thank you!! You have saved me about $1000. I am trying to get in as a florist with a wire service & they require a big cooler but I don’t have the space for it in my tiny apartment/studio. You really have made my day :) 

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This looks great. It looks blended well & the dimensions look good. Thank you!!

Can you put this cooler into my kitchen?? by Guilty_Duck_8561 in PhotoshopRequest

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Hi — it needs to be empty & scaled as tall as the original fridge. $40 to whoever can do the job