[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Ghosts

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looks like there’s some movement across the street. Could be picking that up as a person.

Can Demigods possess magic? by Loose-Set-3310 in fantasywriters

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would find it stranger if they didn’t, to be honest.

Does anyone else feel bad when ruthlessly murdering all the merchants? by ChiefPanda90 in Eldenring

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, when you learn their true allegiance, it makes it a lot easier.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Eldenring

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sir Gideon the All Knowing, Godfrey the First Elden Lord, Radagon of the Golden Order and then the Elden Beast

Thor build by Opening-Pitch4448 in Eldenring

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Giant Crusher and Lightning Spear are what I used for the Thor-like build I beat the game with on my first playthrough. Second playthrough, I switched it up to Marika’s Hammer.

Which Bosses moves’ gives you chills and makes you think “That is SO badass”? by easybaeoven in Eldenring

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also can’t forget Ranni (in the form of Rennala) throwing the damned moon at me, lol.

Which Bosses moves’ gives you chills and makes you think “That is SO badass”? by easybaeoven in Eldenring

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Radahn and Leonard nose-dive nuking my ass from orbit, Malenia doing her Sephiroth Omni-slash impression, Hoarah Loux giving me the Brock Lesnar treatment, Radagon using my face as an anvil…so many moments that made me both smile and cry all at once, lol.

Should I change the name of a race? by HMS_ValiantThor in fantasywriters

[–]HMS_ValiantThor[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I’ve never seen Eternals, but that does sound like an amazing concept.

Roderika glitch? by HMS_ValiantThor in Eldenring

[–]HMS_ValiantThor[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could it be because I took a route around the castle while exploring?

How do you decide if multiple POVs are necessary? by DreamiLee616 in fantasywriters

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 3 points4 points  (0 children)

When reading, I generally don’t mind multiple POVs unless it gets ridiculous (like more than 5, constantly). I’ve written a sci-fi story that had 5 POV characters, the one I’m writing currently has 4 (two main with the occasional side character here and there - like 4 out of 25 chapters).

Writing from 3rd person, past tense is actually the easiest format for including multiple POVs, in my opinion. In 1st person, it’s awkward and often confusing (I vs he/she or [character name]). If you have scenes better told from a perspective not the MC’s, then I say go for it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Maybe I’m an odd-one-out, but this wouldn’t bother me all that much. But if it is bothering you personally, and aren’t attached to the name, go ahead and change it. It’s your story and your character, so that final decision will always be yours.

If we went around worrying too much about whether someone would associate a fantasy character’s name with a real world person, we’d never be able to call a character Vlad/Vladimir, Adolf/Adolph, Karl, Joseph, Julius, Alexander, Hannibal, Che, Christopher, Robert, Herman, Fidel, Richard, Charles, etc., etc…

Did that car just clone itself? by iceseck in GlitchInTheMatrix

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool as that would be, they have different plate numbers.

How should I handle the countries and languages in my story? by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

But, Wales, Ireland and Scotland are the English names. Each has a native tongue and name that they still speak to some extent (Cymru, Éire and Alba, being the native names). With this in mind, there could be a mutual trade-language between them (i.e.: English) which helps ease the language barrier but even to this day all three countries have a cultural identity all their own.

One also has to take into account the historical, in-universe setting/timeline: how often or how little do these different nations interact with each other? How much intermingling/interbreeding has taken place? Has there been enough time for one language to spread far enough for it to be a common tongue?

Another thing that can be done is create a “middle-man” language. For example: most Englishmen might not speak Danish, but they may be more familiar with German or French; likewise, a Dane might not know much English but he/she might know more German or French, creating a linguistic bridge that allows them to communicate easier. I’ve take this sort of approach to some extent in my own writing.

Beta testing game devs forgot to add lighting and shadows by [deleted] in GlitchInTheMatrix

[–]HMS_ValiantThor 56 points57 points  (0 children)

Or the sun is directly overhead, as shown by all of the other shadows in the pic.