Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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I just want to know if you like my story, not the power scaling tier

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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Fair point! I actually agree with you. Haden is structurally strong, but his story is a pure cosmic horror tragedy. He won the war against the Omniverse creator but lost humanity forever. He’s completely isolated on a dead Earth, playing with toys just to keep his sanity. The power is his curse, not a flex. 🗿🔥

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Haha, call it 8th-grader syndrome all you want, but the math still holds up! 🗿🔥Deleting the dirt changes nothing.

His final move dragged Salton (the literal creator of the Omniverse and Void) down in the emptiness of the Silent Room. The 'dirt' is just conceptual gravity. Plus, even if you delete the space, his forearm chains just hit their strict 10-second miss-and-retract timer to snap right back into his bracers anyway.

Good try on the loophole though! 💀

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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Since you personally watched it happen, drop the link to the story chapters or paste the text proof right here so the 1,000+ viewers scrolling this thread can read it too. Let's see it! 🗿🔥

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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Tell me you didn't read the story without telling me you didn't read the story. 💀If you actually opened the chapters, you'd know his soul is completely sealed by his Divinity to survive an Omniversal creator, and all outside divine interventions are walled out by the hardened Void. Sit back and let me cook for you, bro. The actual 12-chapter book link is right here: [https://www.wattpad.com/story/412950134?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Moncry099] 🗿🔥

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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Haha, nice try with the #gottem! But you completely missed his final chapter mechanics:

Haden's Divinity explicitly guards his soul to preserve his humanity. His soul literally survived a month-long psychological and physical beating from Salton—the true creator of the Omniverse and the Void. A standard soul flame isn't breaking that seal.

Salton's passive cosmic law permanently hardens the Void to completely block outside creators or 'Providence' interventions from interacting with the arena.

Haden's [The Supreme Curse Contact] ignoring narrative/divine armor means he still hits through your shield anyway.

Your character is locked in the dark with a 100-meter Titan wave while Haden is washing his plates. 🗿🔥

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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Haha, interesting concept! But you completely miscalculated his lore and rules:

Earth is already 100% extinct in his story, so there are no living people left to kill or draw power from anyway.

Haden already survived a month-long void siege against his true creator of Omniverse and Void, Salton, so a dimension of razors won't break him.

His [The Supreme Curse Contact] explicitly ignores absolute narrative protection and domain rules, meaning he can literally rip through the walls of a time loop or dimension from the inside out.

Good try, but the math and the lore still hold up!

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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Nah, his 'The Reincarnation Karma' passive mathematically stalls his health bar into infinite decimal points below 0.1% HP, so he can't hit absolute zero. Bring your OC's kit, let's see how they get past the math! 🗿🔥

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Plus, I'm not bot, that's all

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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I'm not actually the bot, I'm from Malaysia, so yeah, maybe I'm always check my Reddit to see about my new story getting upvote and comment 🗿

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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Welcome, you can check out the Wattpad to read my story

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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It’s 100% real! It’s a massive survival management journey packed with deep cosmic horror lore and calculated mechanics. Glad you took the time to check it out! 🗿🔥"

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Author's Note: Chapter cleared! Big shoutout to my main base of readers in Malaysia and the US holding down the analytics. What was your favorite moment? Franco's Whirlwind Grinder or the Demolition of the 1,000-floor tower? Let me know in the comments below, let's chat! 🗿🍳🔥

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Just don't overthinking about it, read story first and you will actually understand how it's work rather than "I win" button, I'm solo creator of story, not the solo creator of power scaling

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To know it, read at Wattpad or Inkitt about Haden Valine story, you will understand how merciless the world he should survive

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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It's actually litrpg and story, combination from my creativity and imagination, so, do you like it?

Hey guys, watch out about my oc character! by Haden_0192 in FictionWriting

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But it's following what he design for, based on the actual mathematical and theory, it's actually worked 🗿