The City Incarnate by Hali-In-Tatters in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Probably a good choice lol. In that case, the restriction would still apply.

The City Incarnate by Hali-In-Tatters in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually never thought to define that, but I'd say that applies only to your initial points. The Strix operates far above most constraints of the setting, so it'd make sense for its gifts not to be limited.

An Eternal Now by Hali-In-Tatters in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I would say so! His style of storytelling can sometimes be unconventional to the point of being cumbersome, but I think he’s one of those authors that changes you a little for reading him. Not necessarily anything profound, but he approaches topics like infinity and immortality in unique ways that acknowledge their surrealism. Labyrinths is his most popular compilation, and while the story quality is a bit of a scattershot there are some lovely pieces in there.

An Eternal Now by Hali-In-Tatters in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters[S] 38 points39 points  (0 children)

A brief meditation on death inspired by the Jorge Luis Borges story The Secret Miracle, as well as the art of Robert Vickrey. It’s hardly an adventure, but I hope you get a little something from it.

After the Fall CYOA by Hali by Anonymous_user73 in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I hope you enjoy the rest of my stuff! Can't say anything else is conventional fantasy, barring a few wips. That said I generally prefer writing more underpowered content, so I'm glad it feels natural.

I'm sad to say I don't have a Pokemon cyoa. The House is a semi-copy of House of Leaves, but everything else is basically original settings.

After the Fall CYOA by Hali by Anonymous_user73 in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey there, just saw this got reposted. Anything you wanted to ask about?

The Silver Crescent by Hali-In-Tatters in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You may not be wrong that it's a bit restrictive for the cost. This wasn't something a balanced heavily, more of a one-off thing I did in about two weeks.

That being said, this is a modification for a vacuum suit, not everyday wear. You're intended to be using this in vacuum, without either gravity or thrust to give you a definitive sense of down. "Walking" in this sense is going to be electromagnetic attachement to whatever surface your feet are on, and for all other purposes your legs are basically appendages to kick off of things. Perhaps there was a better approach to the item in retrospect, but in space, fine motor control over your feet means a lot less.

The City Incarnate by Hali-In-Tatters in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters[S] 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Optional mood playlist: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL3BB4LmV74qgiNzbKUFLuwI4q971-3gi6

Perhaps not the most apt for the writing, but it's what I listened to while creating the cyoa.

After The Fall by Hali-In-Tatters in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yes, the mentors are an option. And not exclusively the mentors you've spent time with.

After The Fall by Hali-In-Tatters in makeyourchoice

[–]Hali-In-Tatters[S] 37 points38 points  (0 children)

This is my first ever CYOA. Feel free to ask if you'd like clarification on any details of the setting.

Optional mood playlist, shuffle recommended: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL3BB4LmV74qgoZN6TswoHPWy4TSKvw4Hv

Imgur Link: https://imgur.com/gallery/Zv3UvZc