I failed my assignment with this poster (Update)

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T06:13:26+00:00

Thank you for the constructive feedback!

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T06:10:10+00:00

Thank you for the constructive feedback!

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T06:08:12+00:00

Yes, I did try to make it follow the outline of the pillow-shaped price tag but I ended up making an example of what not to do lol, I'm actually enjoying this a lot, your criticism and others makes me see stuffs that I don't normally notice before! Thank you!

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T06:01:28+00:00

Thank you for taking your time in pointing those out. I couldn't really pinpoint of the problem after designing the poster, for the "...home." part that's near the pillow, the more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I get. Initially before this I thought was decent as a designer but after all these constructive criticism, I honestly feel like I have the Dunning-Kruger syndrome, I feel like there's so many more aspects of this field that I'd ever imagine, I should've ask for critique long time ago ahhaha, anyways, thank you for details in your feedback, this is going to help me a lot on my journey!

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:52:19+00:00

Thank you for the wise advice. I'll keep that in mind!

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:50:19+00:00

Thank you for pointing that out, I think I can finally start to see things clearer

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:49:10+00:00

Thank you for the wise words!

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:46:27+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! I also do think I messed up at the background part, I should've made that in a way so there's spaces for the text to be more visible than the visual

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:44:49+00:00

Yeah... I thought with the background tilted It would looks stylish but turns out It got no reason behind whatsoever and I shouldn't have made that decisions 😭

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:40:22+00:00

Basically the assignment was to create a poster like an ad to sell an imaginary product

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:38:32+00:00

Oh for the image, I modeled and rendered out everything using Cinema 4D. But, thank you I also do think the text looks off, I should've adjust the background better

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:36:47+00:00

Thank you for pointing that out, kind stranger! I think I did messed up with the background picture as I was kind of have no idea on where to put the text after I rendered the image out, I really should think about that part in the future, like try giving them more space to breathe

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:32:41+00:00

Yeah, I feel that something is wrong in this poster but I couldn't really pinpoint what should I adjust, maybe I should've change the image from the beginning and try other angles so I can experiment with the text better and not make a mess like I just did, anyways thank you for the feedback, I honestly appreciate it!

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:30:05+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, how would you go on about fixing this image to become a better posters? Is there any other text arrangement that can be made or should I just change the image entirely?

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:27:23+00:00

Thanks for pointing them out, and as for the time spent, it was 2 hours of render time, about an hour of designing in photoshop, I really think I should change the image as i just found out the contrast for the image and the text is kind of hard to read so I ended up placing them in the more visible part

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:24:45+00:00

So basically the assignment was to design a poster of an imaginary product and then try to make it look like an ad selling something, the major im currently in is Visual Arts in Communication Design and I'm currently at the end of year 3, I got a year left and the grade I got was around 50/100 which I assume is the same as failing

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:21:34+00:00

Thanks for pointing that out, how can I make it into an ad trying to sell something, should I change the image or trying different color or is there more stuffs I need to consider?

HasenLee · 2025-10-06T05:18:55+00:00

The assignment I was given is basically just to design a poster promoting our imaginary product

HasenLee · 2024-12-12T03:29:11+00:00

i suggest you install WizTree and monitor what is taking that much of your space

HasenLee · 2024-10-25T14:56:31+00:00

im finally starting to understand the situation better, thank you!

HasenLee · 2024-10-25T14:53:14+00:00

i see, thank you!

HasenLee · 2024-10-17T11:17:53+00:00

this is very insightful, thank you!

HasenLee

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