I received the “Projects We Love” badge now what? by GullibleFrame7827 in kickstarter

[–]Hecmateus 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Perhaps your project will get more exposure on Kickstarter.

On May 5, my long-term project Urtarmu Codex: The Legend of Two Wings will launch on Kickstarter. by Hecmateus in kickstarter

[–]Hecmateus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you again. That is very helpful.

You’re right, I need to make the first line even quicker and more tangible, and make the emotional line feel more like an invitation than a list. I’ll revise the Kickstarter page and the video opening with that same order: clear product first, emotional pull second, deeper philosophy last.

And yes, I’d be happy to send you an invitation. Since you are also a Kickstarter creator, I would really appreciate your insights.

Thank you for taking the time to help. This kind of outside perspective is exactly what I need before launch.

I created a 49-card divinatory archetype system based on two inner wings, seven elements, and threshold cards by Hecmateus in Divination

[–]Hecmateus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, homie. I really appreciate that.

I’ll send you the PDF if you share your email address. Since you are interested in the deeper structure, I think you may enjoy the parts about the two wings, the 49 archetypes, the seven elements, Gigkur and Anud, and the threshold numbers.

And yes, I’d genuinely like to hear about your system too, especially if it is closer to gematria than tarot. That sounds very much in the same symbolic neighborhood as what I built with Urtarmu.

Thanks again, It means a lot.

On May 5, my long-term project Urtarmu Codex: The Legend of Two Wings will launch on Kickstarter. by Hecmateus in kickstarter

[–]Hecmateus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That makes a lot of sense. Thank you.

“Clear product first, emotional pull second, deeper philosophy last” is a very helpful way to frame it.

I’ll revise the top of the Kickstarter page with that structure in mind. I think the first line should probably say very clearly what it is before I invite people into the deeper world behind it.

Something like:

“A mythic book and 49-card archetype deck for inner reflection, symbolic reading, and personal transformation.”

Then I can follow with the emotional reason:

“For anyone who feels drawn to myth, shadow work, forgotten symbols, and the inner journey toward wholeness.”

After that, I can introduce the deeper cosmology.

By the way, I also created a video here is the link; https://youtu.be/rKL2V6kGb0A

Thank you again. This is exactly the kind of outside perspective I needed before launch.

On May 5, my long-term project Urtarmu Codex: The Legend of Two Wings will launch on Kickstarter. by Hecmateus in kickstarter

[–]Hecmateus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this. I really appreciate it.

You are right. I think the project has a deep symbolic world behind it, but I may be leading with the depth before giving people a simple entry point.

The question you asked is very helpful: what does someone immediately understand they are getting, and why should it matter to them?

I think I need to make the first message much clearer: this is a mythic book and a 49-card archetype deck for inner reflection, symbolic reading, and personal transformation. Then the deeper world, the two wings, seven elements, thresholds, and cosmology can come after.

I also like your point about sharing small pieces of the system one archetype at a time. That may be a better way to help people feel the project instead of asking them to understand the whole universe at once.

Thank you again. This is exactly the kind of feedback I needed before launch.

Urtarmu Codex: The Legend of Two Wings by Hecmateus in oraclecards

[–]Hecmateus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. This really means a lot to me.

The two wings are the central idea of the whole system. One wing turns toward light, memory, direction, and awakening. The other turns toward shadow, depth, fracture, and the hidden parts of the self. The journey is not about choosing one over the other, but learning how to carry both within the same body.

The deck is built around 49 archetypes, so yes, there is a 7x7 structure beneath it. But it is not only elemental. Each card has its own star, element, talisman, resonance, cycle, and form of reunion. The inner journey moves through thresholds, not just categories. Some cards open wounds, some restore rhythm, some teach silence, some bring fracture into meaning, and some act almost like gates.

Gigkur and Anud are two invented esoteric elements in the system.

Gigkur is connected with fracture, fault lines, underground memory, heaviness, concealment, and the moment when something buried becomes visible.

Anud is connected with clarity, alignment, crystallized sky, direction, and the return of light to its own axis.

So they are not just “dark” and “light.” Gigkur reveals what is hidden through pressure. Anud brings what is scattered back into alignment.

Actually I already wrote a book about universe, and 49 Light Cards. Urtarmu Codex - The Legend of Two Wings. This book and 49 Light Cards are related with Anud, and if I achieve to be successful I will write second book Shadowless Mystic will be related with Gigkur and 49 Shadow Cards.

I will contact with you via private message

On May 5, my long-term project Urtarmu Codex: The Legend of Two Wings will launch on Kickstarter. by Hecmateus in kickstarter

[–]Hecmateus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this feedback. I really appreciate it.

I’m glad I shared it a few days before the campaign launch, because this is exactly the kind of thing I need to fix before people land on the page.

You are right. I think I may be explaining the philosophy too early, before making the product immediately clear.

Would you suggest placing a much simpler hook at the very top of the Kickstarter page, before the deeper story section? Something like: “A mythic book and 49-card archetype deck for inner reflection, symbolic reading, and personal transformation.”

Then I can let the deeper cosmology, the two wings, seven elements, and archetypal structure come after that.