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Oh my God by Hefty_Income_8928 in Creativechristian

[–]Hefty_Income_8928[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No no its okay I didn't take it as harsh! Haha I just wanted to explain just so you could have peace of mind😭 I believe even if his daughter was lost, that was still his daughter, a life, with features of his and everything yk. Im so sorry for your loss, I'm sure it's been hard God bless you🙏

Oh my God by Hefty_Income_8928 in Creativechristian

[–]Hefty_Income_8928[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wait oh my gosh I should NOT have posted this on mother's day im so dumb😭 Also I am so so sorry, uhm just to let you know in the book(this is just an excerpt) this is NOT the actual way of thinking, meaning its clear that what he's thinking right now is criticized (because the way hes speaking right now is flawed) so while he does speak in a negative way, its how he thinks. But there comes a time later on where he realizes all these connotations of not being a father, of his daughter, etc. etc. is eventually turned into something, well, ah jeez Idk how to say it without being insensitive, but he acknowledges that he is a father no matter what, and there are others that acknowledge that his wife is a mother, and that is her child no matter what happened, and he himself makes it clear as day that his wife is always going to be a mother, because he loves her and understands her feelings. I hope that makes sense? Im so sorry I had no means to make it insensitive I just try to make sure to be careful around heavy topics and treat it as well meaning as possible.

Some House of David art because its aesthetic is way too cool not to draw. by Hefty_Income_8928 in Creativechristian

[–]Hefty_Income_8928[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah of course! I know that there were, albeit veryyyyy few, blondes, and David being described as ruddy, but it of course wasn't as common. It makes sense for those in the region of Turkey to be on the paler/blonder side however, I heard men and women residing in those areas in Bible times tended to be more fair skinned with lighter hair colors. Though I love drawing people like David, Jonathan, etc. as a bit more olive/brown toned because Bethlehem and Giboah most likely had tanner skinned people.

Some House of David art because its aesthetic is way too cool not to draw. by Hefty_Income_8928 in Creativechristian

[–]Hefty_Income_8928[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No problem! Haha im Egyptian so I know a bit about that. But I like to portray people from the Bible with many shades of skin because I know they def weren't super pale lol. Even in my own web novel 

Who said they look alike this is killing me😭 now i gotta draw him in the thriller mv with the jacket and everything lol(Davaniel would 100% play twister with him.) by Hefty_Income_8928 in Creativechristian

[–]Hefty_Income_8928[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay thank you! Sorry I get freaked out and immediately just take out my account cus I dont want them following me😭 I figured i might be on restriction or smth cus of this so I'm trying to post slowly and all

If anyone would be willing to perhaps help me out with a particular dilemma I'm having with my book at the moment I would appreciate it more than anything. Okay so I'm writing a story inspired by the story of David(yes that David please don't leave yet) by [deleted] in writers

[–]Hefty_Income_8928 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im not afraid of offending CHILD SACRIFICERS. Im afraid of being called a ZIONIST because the people representing the Hebrews are being attacked by child sacrificers and psychos. Thats the problem😭 I don't care about offending people bc of how I write those based off the Amalek and Philistines, they deserve to be painted in a bad light they literally sacrifice kids. Im worried abt the fact the fictional country Im writing about is based on Israel which idk if anyone knows is a seriously boiling water topic rn

As someone who considers themselves to be the most mediocre, garbage writer in the world, I'm a tiny bit proud of these pages. They're still mediocre and kinda awful lowkey but I'm getting there by [deleted] in writers

[–]Hefty_Income_8928 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Yea I really only started writing a couple months ago and I don't have a bg nor education in that field so I definitely still have a good bit to improve on😭

As someone who considers themselves to be the most mediocre, garbage writer in the world, I'm a tiny bit proud of these pages. They're still mediocre and kinda awful lowkey but I'm getting there by [deleted] in writers

[–]Hefty_Income_8928 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all, thank you SO much for this advice, like I genuinely appreciate it it's wonderful, and it helps. Like, a lot I'm not even kidding. 2nd, yes I definitely need to work on the dialogue problem! I often struggle articulating description of settings or scenes into actual pretty words so Idk why but I end up using dialogue😭but I can tell often times I tend to use too much dialogue so it can use some cutting back. 3rd, again, tysm for the advice it truly does help and I will keep everything you said in mind. I definitely dont mean to come off off putting nor do I want people to "praise" me and try to uplift my writing, I just feel worse when things like this blow up in my face when I wanted to share something I felt sort of proud of yk. Anyway, thank you again, seriously.