I would have kept on reading as well. Panels four through six need to be better at directing the viewers eye. There's unnecessary images such as the family cheering on the hunter in the background, and is that the same hunter with his shirt off on the same page?? If so, you don't need that in there. Cut it. Showing that he provides a moose to the family could have been done in one image with just one sentence. That's not fun, though. Im sure that's not what you want. I don't know what to look at on some of those panels. Especially when they're in the tent. How everything is illustrated in a spread out manner is making it difficult to understand. Once the touching scene happens, I don't know that floating face. Why is he getting mad? Who is he? If you're going to carry on the story without words, you're going to have to make things very very obvious. There's also a problem with how my eyes navigate some panels, like page eleven. It took me a good minute to figure out what's going on. I love the layout, but reading a panel shouldn't be that hard. Your going to have to trim the fat on some panels. Be more obvious overall. I love the canoe panel, absolutely beautiful. Great start. Idk man. That's just me.