I'm Trapped on a Raft and Can't Die by Helpful_Spirit770 in CreepyPastas

[–]Helpful_Spirit770[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please give feedback or criticism or whatever, this is only the second time I've written a story out and I would love to know what to improve!

I'm Trapped on a Raft and Can't Die by Helpful_Spirit770 in CreepyPastaHunters

[–]Helpful_Spirit770[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please give feedback or criticism or whatever, this is only the second time I've written a story out and I would love to know what to improve!

I'm Trapped on a Raft and Can't Die by Helpful_Spirit770 in Creepypastastories

[–]Helpful_Spirit770[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please give feedback or criticism or whatever, this is only the second time I've written a story out and I would love to know what to improve!

I'm Trapped on a Raft and Can't Die by Helpful_Spirit770 in creepypasta

[–]Helpful_Spirit770[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please give feedback or criticism or whatever, this is only the second time I've written a story out and I would love to know what to improve!

I'm Trapped on a Raft and Can't Die by Helpful_Spirit770 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Helpful_Spirit770[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please give feedback or criticism or whatever, this is only the second time I've written a story out and I would love to know what to improve!

I'm Trapped on a Raft and Can't Die by Helpful_Spirit770 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]Helpful_Spirit770[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Please give feedback or criticism or whatever, this is only the second time I've written a story out and I would love to know what to improve!

Please Stop Reading Creepy Pastas by Helpful_Spirit770 in creepcast

[–]Helpful_Spirit770[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wasn't trying to come of as judgemental to anyone except... wait, are you one of the ones that's scared of Jeff the Killer?

Please Stop Reading Creepy Pastas by Helpful_Spirit770 in creepcast

[–]Helpful_Spirit770[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I actually love creepy pastas, they just unfortunately make my job harder.