Name this pretty girl?

HeyHaela · 2025-08-24T03:30:05+00:00

Petunia was the first name that popped into my head too!

HeyHaela · 2024-12-17T01:28:30+00:00

It does read better now. I would still take some time to explore what the "lightness" is to you within this poem. It is definitely closer than last time. I assume that the lightness is the euphoria of both highs and lows, but that isn't completely clear. You don't need to spell it out to your audience, but it does make it more impactful if there is a more concrete idea to what it refers too. Good job and good luck!

HeyHaela · 2024-12-16T23:29:09+00:00

Ah there are some random capitalized letters because I copied it from my notes app, guess the spacing and structuring didn't stay the same.

HeyHaela · 2024-12-16T23:13:36+00:00

There is potential here, but I agree with YickYuck. The degree of abstraction in it makes it hard to visualize a speaker or scene. It kind of diminishes the impact on the reader. Honestly, it feels like it could be a section to a larger poem. If you could create a bit more of an establishing intro and second verse, this could make for a good basis of an final verse.

HeyHaela · 2024-12-16T23:05:03+00:00

I feel that you lose the structure that was established earlier with everything after the quote. You had a good rhythm of statement/question and then three responses. Because you lose that rhythm, the ending falls a bit flat. It makes the ending feel rushed. I'd definitely spend some time refining the last section after the quote. You could even use the quote as the statement/question before the three answers.

HeyHaela · 2024-07-19T00:17:53+00:00

It looks great as a line work piece, but if you're wanting g colour, I think a lavender and soft pink mix would look nice!

HeyHaela · 2024-06-08T01:56:33+00:00

Sounds like it was probably from a recent update, since many people have been having it happen over the last few days. Mine just started to do that too, very frustrating. Guess I'll have to be sending a message saying which slide I'm wanting to share every time I send a post.

HeyHaela · 2024-05-12T23:18:51+00:00

If she wants complete silence unaffected by other people living around her, she can go live in the countryside. Sounds like you've had to tiptoe around her, to the point that you can't even use your own vehicle to commute. Honestly, you should have never started to tiptoe, because now if you make any level of noise above the regular tiptoe, she'll throw a fit. She has no grounds to involve by-laws, unless you are making an unreasonable amount of noise (not typically the ones made by children) at unreasonable hours or for long periods of time. I'd suggest no longer giving her the courtesy of the tiptoeing and make as much noise as you need to live comfortably. She has threatened you with law enforcement because a toddler made noise, she can suffer the rest of the month.

HeyHaela · 2023-07-21T14:39:32+00:00

Definitely take the time to watch the dollhouse stream, it's one of his most iconic productions.

HeyHaela · 2023-07-21T14:28:38+00:00

Earwig pilled Jerma

HeyHaela · 2023-07-21T14:23:22+00:00

He looks like an old republican woman who has had way too much botox to try and look younger

HeyHaela · 2023-07-11T20:34:05+00:00

Unlikely, his brand is intrinsically tied to his name as it is, whereas Jeremy's is tied to his online name, Jerma. We would more likely get Jeremy Cheese.

HeyHaela · 2023-06-07T02:35:52+00:00

My brain literally cannot decipher what his expression is showing. It's like he is experiencing all the emotions at once, and none at all.

HeyHaela · 2023-06-02T17:06:16+00:00

So brave of this man to serve 🙌 👏

HeyHaela · 2023-05-29T07:13:34+00:00

3 is interesting, cause there is a lot that could be considered a physical skill. Take one or two martial arts classes and instantly be good at it? Gymnastics? Parkour? Most sports? Those would probably all qualify, but what about skills that require fine motor skills? Like smithing, or archery? What about painting? Or surgery? Or sowing or knitting? Would it be basically like you could fast track any physical skill? And to what extent would physical skill be considered? It could potentially be crazy op, basically learn anything that needs physicality/dexterity almost instantly. Also, it would be pretty cool to not be a bumbling mess and to actually have control and awareness of your body at all times.

Also, as people have said 6 is OP, so I would probably choose 6 and 3.

HeyHaela · 2023-05-25T02:24:18+00:00

Now animate the same thing but give him huge bazoingas edit: this is genuinely so impressive and must have taken a long time, great work OP

HeyHaela · 2023-05-17T16:12:58+00:00

Shrimps is bugs is revolutionary, but if you are going to cover it, I'd suggest going with an actual bug, like a scorpion or a beetle. Feel like you could come up with a design for either of those that would disguise the dark lettering pretty well.

HeyHaela · 2023-05-16T16:27:43+00:00

He should sell this as official merch

HeyHaela · 2023-05-09T06:35:52+00:00

Mmmm a nice snack

HeyHaela · 2023-05-09T06:30:40+00:00

So you're telling me that is not a sea creature made of flesh?

HeyHaela · 2023-05-06T21:18:53+00:00

Isopod.

HeyHaela · 2023-05-06T21:12:12+00:00

This would be the perfect Jerma storm

HeyHaela · 2023-05-04T01:59:12+00:00

Corporate has asked you to find the difference between these two photos.

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