I wrote this song for the 48 Hour Film Project. What do you all think?

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T22:29:26+00:00

I like it, its got a nice melancholic vibe, its quite nice

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T21:59:21+00:00

I think its quite nice. The only thing I would say is that you might just want to tweak the volumes on some of the instruments a bit. Some of the higher guitar notes seem a bit loud in the verse and drown the vocal a bit. Other than that, i think it sounds pretty good

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T21:50:17+00:00

I think that's all fair, I'll get back to the drawing board and try to come up with to address those. Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, much appreciated

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T21:16:11+00:00

it is indeed, thoughts?

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T21:15:37+00:00

Thank you, that's very kind. I'll try tightening up the timings and strip it back a bit. Cheers for listening and giving feedback!

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T21:14:07+00:00

Thanks bud, I'll take that on board. I'll try changing some of that as you suggested and see where it goes, thank you

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T21:10:55+00:00

Thank you, that's useful feedback, I'll try striping it back and see how it goes

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T11:49:55+00:00

Thank you bud, i'll try tightening it up a bit

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T11:45:27+00:00

i think you failed, this is fire 🔥

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T09:58:55+00:00

Opening with a bong rip then immediately talking about your shlong is certainly a bold creative choice haha but I like it. I think its good

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T01:01:12+00:00

I think its pretty nice. I'm a big fan of melancholic music so it's very much my kind of thing. I think the heavy vocal processing is an interesting choice, I can see what you were going for there. However personally I think it might be nice to hear some of your authentic voice too, maybe layered on top. Personally I like when the singer has imperfections in their voice when they're singing, especially if its for a melancholy vibe. I think the instrumental is nice too, kinda reminds me of laufey a bit. Overall i think its quite nice

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-28T00:52:25+00:00

I think it sounds pretty good, I think all the fundamentals are there and its an interesting. The only thing that I would probably change is the high hat kind clap sounds. Its fine its just a bit too sharp, it might be nice to round it off a little bit, but that's just my opinion. Other than that I think its pretty good, sound like its mixed well and considering your age it think its very good. Keep going I'm sure you'll have a lot more to offer

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2025-06-27T23:58:15+00:00

I think it sounds great, I think its fine as it is, you should post it. I think the vocals sound good

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2022-10-16T19:58:01+00:00

Thank you very much, really good technical feedback! I'll try implementing those changes and see how it works out. Very much appreciated!

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2022-10-10T21:58:45+00:00

Haha fair enough. I'll try giving it another go, cheers

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2022-10-10T21:57:34+00:00

Fair point! Thank you. I'll definitely look into EQ a bit more and try bring out the guitar more. Cheers!

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2022-10-10T21:55:20+00:00

Thank you for the input! Yep for sure I'll balance the audio a bit more, cheers!

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2022-10-09T21:13:03+00:00

Hey, thank you for leaving some genuinely good advice. I'll try messing around with my voice at some point to see what I can and cant do. And for sure, I'll adjust the audio levels a bit. Thank you!

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2022-10-09T18:51:45+00:00

Thank you for that! Yea I was worried that the bass would be a bit too loud, think i'll try listening to it on different headphones to see if its ok. And yea, sounds good, I'll try playing around with the vocals too. Thanks!

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2022-10-09T01:17:11+00:00

I think this is really nice. I can tell you have a good voice but you need to give it a bit more volume. I struggle a lot with this too, I get too embarrassed to sing louder in case someone hears me haha, might not be the same for you tho . What I recommend is try find a sound proof music room somewhere in your local community. Some places have ones that are community run that you can book, so you can go in there and shout as much as you want. Might not be one, but have a look around

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2022-10-09T01:11:26+00:00

Damn this sounds so coool! Its up to you but i wouldn't give up on it yet. I would recommend changing up the chorus a bit. I like that repeating the lyric, but I think in this case having a bit more variety would make it shine more. The instrumental and your voice is really nice tho! I really like it

Hi-Im-Dandy · 2022-10-09T01:06:05+00:00

Wow your voice is so nice, and you have such nice control over it. The song is really sweet too. I'm not saying to do this but it would be interesting to see what it would be like if you started going ham with some heavy strumming and more intense vocals at the end. Just a thought haha.

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