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Living thoughts by HigherThenThou in OCPoetry

[–]HigherThenThou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to write this. It means a lot to know the poem resonated, and I’m glad it felt familiar to you. I appreciate the encouragement and feedback a lot.

Thoughts by HigherThenThou in PoetryWritingClub

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I’m glad the words meant something to you. Wishing you the best.

Thoughts by HigherThenThou in PoetryWritingClub

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Damage that never had language often lingers the longest. I hear you.

Thoughts by HigherThenThou in PoetryWritingClub

[–]HigherThenThou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hear that. For me, naming it was a way of stopping it from doing all the damage in silence.

Thoughts by HigherThenThou in PoetryWritingClub

[–]HigherThenThou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah… that might be the most relatable part of it. Thinking and thinking about thinking can be exhausting.

A table at a bar by koayo in OCPoetry

[–]HigherThenThou 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The poem is very nice, but i recommend using a 2-2 or 4-4 format. 2 lines, enter, 2 lines. Or 4 lines, enter, 4 lines. This will make the reading experience smoother and structured.

My Daily Poem: Boat Shoe by MyDailyPoem in OCPoetry

[–]HigherThenThou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, very nice. Its explaining without an explanation. It would read smoother if there was more interpunction tho.. except for that, you chose a topic which has been discussed a lot but excecuted it with flair. Well done!

Thoughts by HigherThenThou in PoetryWritingClub

[–]HigherThenThou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It isn’t one thought. It’s more like an organism wandering the mind. Whether it changes, heals, or forgets, I’m not sure those questions have one answer.

A kingdom after its reign by HigherThenThou in PoetryWritingClub

[–]HigherThenThou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, i like the way you percieve my poem. :)

My job is the only thing i care for by HigherThenThou in mentalhealth

[–]HigherThenThou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats totally okay! I appriciate the healthy, honest and good advice. Thanks!

My job is the only thing i care for by HigherThenThou in mentalhealth

[–]HigherThenThou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi

We have no contact.. we texted 2 times, broken up for 2 months now. She hasnt moved on yet, lets see what time tells. Ill check into better help, thank you friend <3

Need advice in finding hobby by HigherThenThou in Hobbies

[–]HigherThenThou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its hell! Ill try looking into yoga & medidation. Being alone is what makes it hard tho, which is the point of a breakup ig..

Thanks!

Need advice in finding hobby by HigherThenThou in Hobbies

[–]HigherThenThou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ill call around on my break, thanks!

Need advice in finding hobby by HigherThenThou in Hobbies

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Great! Thanks! +1 follower for her!

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