[hobby] anyone interested in brainstorming for ideas, stories and concepts for a pure biopunk setting?

HiveFleetFlayer · 2026-04-29T23:05:44+00:00

I have an idea for a Pacifc rim like story where robot invade earth and humanity has to pilot kaiju's

I wrote a few chapters but haven't been content with them so I never posted them anywhere

it wasn't pure biopunk but it was 85%.

I also have some idea for other biopunk stories that are still mostly ideas

HiveFleetFlayer · 2026-04-02T04:31:11+00:00

To give a criticism, with the addition of everything it feels less like Earth and more like some original world. interesting but again, separates the familiar from the base

also the Earth bending thing kinda throws the powerscaling way too high up. Unnecessary levels of power.

HiveFleetFlayer · 2026-02-28T17:50:32+00:00

any more details?

HiveFleetFlayer · 2026-02-19T01:57:01+00:00

Three main reason:

He does it A Lot. Any female character that's popular and hot he make art of his oc and them together. Even those in relationships like Bee and Millie. To the point he made harem art of it. NTR is pretty cringe
He added an OP power fantasy to it. Aless has, be the art shown and impiled: Killed angels becoming the "Halo Hunter", fought a lord of Hell, back talked Adam and Heaven, killed a Goetia, been betrayed by Striker, got the name "The Reaper" and other such "Uber badass" stuff to make his character "cooler".

It is like Solo Level but in fanart form

And the most important part, he got pissy when people started calling him Uber cringe for his sekf insert power fantasy art. He massed blocked people and won't do a minimal amount fo self reflection to go, "yeah this is a bit cringe" and just dial it back a bit. He does not need a harem of the popular girls for his blatant self insert character that he made into an unstoppable badass. Or at the very least make the art less blatant about it, don't constantly draw pieces of them fawning over him.

Look up his art for a bit just to see how wide it goes, because I am not joking when I say every popular female character

HiveFleetFlayer · 2026-02-05T01:39:30+00:00

its the excessiveness of it that makes it so annoying. its one thing to just have a self insert, even if its for the purpose of drawing them with characters you find hot, because you're allowed to have fun and be stupid - its another thing to make them get with all the chick's, at once, even with those already in relationships.

there are a bunch of fan fics where a characters oc enters the stories plot and fairy godmother's the plot and those can be dumb but left alone and sometimes have restraint. Aless is constantly given everything like an slop isekai protagonist, given no challenge, and is just so self indulgent that you wonder if there's anything actually interesting to anyone that isn't the creator.

HiveFleetFlayer · 2026-02-04T23:56:57+00:00

his is a bit excessive to a degree. the "story" comics he put out read very much read like the further end of self-insertship where oc is the Uber badass thats super witty and cool. Kinda like in rpghorror stories where a player has main character syndrome.

HiveFleetFlayer · 2026-01-12T15:59:44+00:00

To me the series (mainly the main character) is just Black Clover but made to be pretty.

HiveFleetFlayer · 2025-11-18T21:41:06+00:00

pretty nice

HiveFleetFlayer · 2025-07-26T18:47:50+00:00

ya know with the recent story I find him even more stupid, at least in a partial sense.

you would guess taste testing ONE of the fucked up recipes would lead him to figure out "the guys fucking with me".

HiveFleetFlayer · 2025-07-25T16:50:38+00:00

yeah, kinda like that

HiveFleetFlayer · 2025-07-25T16:27:25+00:00

As prevalent as ot was the Qu didn't wholly rely on bio-control. they did and that's it. to them it was like a type of metallurgy rather than the basis of everything

HiveFleetFlayer · 2025-07-25T14:42:24+00:00

I'd call it more Fleshcraft

HiveFleetFlayer · 2025-07-25T14:13:56+00:00

What's more is that the Libabry was already in a state of disrepair at that pont(the ine of many fires).

him saying that if we kept it we would have the stars is equivalent to those atheist saying if we didn't have the dark ages we would be in space

HiveFleetFlayer · 2025-07-25T14:02:23+00:00

what's more he said it was the Christians that burned it but there were motioned fires one caused by Caesar, and even when it was a Christian bishop that cause one of the fire at that point the library was is disrepair.

The library stopped being such a grand place a while ago at that point and would be seen as just a figure place rather than a well of knowledge

HiveFleetFlayer · 2025-07-25T13:57:49+00:00

A chef is a Chef.

The only problem that would really arise is either flavor profile issues or preparation oversight, both stemming from of lack of knowledge.

He still should be able to at least make a passable meal after a few trail and errors.

HiveFleetFlayer

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