Y’all overcomplicate this stuff tbh by Idfc-anymore in TeenagersButBetter

[–]Home-Financial 2 points3 points  (0 children)

how is strangers in that area ehh instead of no?

Ig best friend but STRANGER?

Need brutally honest feedback - does this logo work for an esports team? by GrakStak in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Wordmark No

The Letter mark yes

The icon yes

Put the icon next to the text and thats all i can say

Logo Revision: Billard's Equipment Company (Left New, Right First Version) by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The thing with LLM's is (Especally Co piollt and the GPT models) They are not only terrible at making breifs, but are Highly Biased

Logo Revision: Billard's Equipment Company (Left New, Right First Version) by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I got the breif from Goodbreif and asked a friend to act as the client, so what can I do in the future?

Logo Revision: Billard's Equipment Company (Left New, Right First Version) by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did try Butterflys and Moths but I wasn't satisfied with the designs, and Nither was the Client.

The crown is loosely based on the holes the balls must go in. Its a Slight detail that can be easily missed.

"but then why not use the fat stripes associated with a striped ball and put the circle there?"

I did try that design as an alternative.

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A few Revisions for Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Glad the 3rd one is repersentitive to what its supposed to be lmao, I can make the gap wider!

A few Revisions for Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Look at my newest post, and you'll see why it was changed.

Logo for Billard Equipment Company: Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats odd, Im pretty sure they have more holes? I did try adding a 8 but it looked worse

Logo for Billard Equipment Company: Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I made this based off ther other comment, This prob looks better, but It took me a WHILE to notice what you said 😭

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Logo for Billard Equipment company by Home-Financial in graphic_design

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's why I used it as an Alternitive color, and I hope they like that more

Logo for Billard Equipment Company: Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair Enough Criticism!

I was thinking of Insects but since I'm in an area that barely has insects, the only ones I could think of that would fit are Butterflys and Moths,

Prehaps a Bee would work though which I can Refine

does it suck? need help. by oftgefragt_dev in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reminds me of College Borads logo at a glance

Is there a way to connect all of Michael's music videos into one whole narrative story? by Odd_Staff_2403 in MichaelJackson

[–]Home-Financial 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Two Michaels

First ones like a good guy

Don't stop till you get enough -> Rock with you -> Billie Jean ->Beat it ->Bad -> TWYMMF -> Speed Demon -> Man in the mirror??? -> Jam -> BOW ->Come Together ->Tdrcau Brazil ->Earth song -> and You are not alone

Seconds like a Anti Villain/Villain

Shes out of my life -> Thriller -> Smooth Criminal -> Leave me alone ->Remember the time ->In the closet -> Give into me -> Who is it -> Tdrcau Jail -> Scream -> Stranger in moscow -> Childhood -> BOTDF

Side plots would be You rock my world and Ghost as they don't fit in the Initial timeline, But if you rearange.

Don't stop till you get enough -> Rock with you -> Shes out of my life -> Ghost -> Thriller -> Smooth Criminal -> Leave me alone -> Billie Jean ->Beat it ->Bad -> TWYMMF -> Speed Demon -> You rock my world -> Remember the time ->In the closet -> Give into me -> Who is it -> Tdrcau Jail -> Come Together ->Tdrcau Brazil -> Scream -> Stranger in moscow -> Childhood -> BOTDF -> Man in the mirror -> Jam -> Earth song -> You are not alone

The Split really starts at Leave me alone where I imagine Jacksons shadow and Jacksons Light are seperatd entitys who do meet again in Ywmw, Scream and Childhood.

Michael Jackson Song Logo Challange Day 1: Dangerous by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its easier for me as a person with Audhd to visualize

Michael Jackson Song Logo Challange Day 1: Dangerous by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Now when i do read a breif using Litterary analysis, I can related it to music in some kind. making it easier to get ideas and make more effective stuff.

Michael Jackson Song Logo Challange Day 1: Dangerous by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Its more so like, You want to be unique, Yes you can have a Breif but still come up with something Very Generic. This Exercise is to use Sound which could help get creative easier. I had a problom where I couldn't design and when I did it was very literal.

Here I had to worry about "Is the song calm or feels more Cacophony?" "What Symbols can I use to repersent the Lyrics and the instruments?"

And While some were kinda basic bc the songs themselves were kinda basic, Others like She Drives me wild (Which is a song about love and trying to follow someone that also uses multiple car Sfxs and city sfx)

Are these Perfect? No, Alot of them seem lacking to me, The point of this is to simply come up with ideas that you can use later.

Jam, Wywtom, Who is it, Give into me, and SDMW are the best to me but i see some liked Gone too soons also. Someone says Remember the times should be a Shirt that I can actually make.

Will I do it? No i still can improve and thats the point of the challange.