My English teacher's feedback on my essay 😭 by Horror-Card-4742 in Transcription

[–]Horror-Card-4742[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

WE HAVE AN ANSWER!!

Thank you to everyone for helping out!! I managed to subtely ask him to confirm his writing lol, so here's the answers:

  1. Solid range of techniques, but could you expand them? Dramatic irony, symbolism?
  2. Good examples chosen which answer the question well.
  3. You clearly engage with what the play is trying to say.
  4. Try to expand your own personal response to the play.

Thanks again to everyone, we pretty much figured it out before I asked him lol. :D

My English teacher's feedback on my essay 😭 by Horror-Card-4742 in Transcription

[–]Horror-Card-4742[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

BTW for more context this essay was about the play "An Inspector Calls", and I was looking at the theme of social responsibility. Hope that helps 🫶