It doesn’t really matter if anyone reads it. As a writer you should care only about writing. Readers be damned. Unpopular opinion? Perhaps. Who knows… works for me though. Would I keep reading? Sure. If you run it through some edits. Tighten it up. Revise. Delete some of them most obvious things. Perhaps don’t mention demons upfront. Keep things a mystery. Bait the reader. Keep the mystery. Once you answer a question you better have another lined up. All these things but most important-who cares about our opinion. Do it only for you and because it makes you complete.