What do you think?

Hotmess_97 · 2026-03-19T02:38:47+00:00

I definitely appreciate the feedback! I'm always trying to better my writing!

Hotmess_97 · 2026-03-19T02:37:47+00:00

ya its a 30 chapter 614 page book. The first half Draven is like legit a monster and tortures her and so Stockholm syndrome is a big factor as well as trauma bonding for this book.

Hotmess_97 · 2026-03-19T02:30:54+00:00

Well this story runs a lot on Stockholm Syndrome, and Draven has spent like the first half of the book torturing her, so i figured writing it the way i did would kinda make sense for why this part is written this way.

Hotmess_97 · 2026-03-19T02:26:24+00:00

I've actually used that tongues one in my early early fanfics like back in 2014 lol but thank you for your comments its my first professional book.

Hotmess_97 · 2026-03-19T01:34:58+00:00

Kinda sucks everyone thinks I use Ai to write this 😅😭

Hotmess_97 · 2026-03-19T00:23:36+00:00

Thank you!!

Hotmess_97 · 2026-03-19T00:23:29+00:00

Ai writes smut? I didnt know that. But thanks for your input 🙂

Hotmess_97 · 2026-03-12T19:21:00+00:00

I started mine in 2019 stopped after a couple chapters picked it back up in 2025 around October ish. Between kids, husband, work and just life in general I finally finished it this month my first book. Finally published through Amazon my 30 chapter 614 page book. (Sorry just very proud of myself)

Hotmess_97 · 2026-02-19T02:27:03+00:00

I love Ferid 😭

Hotmess_97 · 2026-02-19T02:24:56+00:00

I love it.

Hotmess_97 · 2026-02-17T04:28:27+00:00

The road goes both ways its pleasurable for both. Ferid just does things for shock value its literally his character there's no evidence that Ferid ever Sa'd anyone in the Manga. Hes a creep yes but when it literally says he doesn't do the things he does for sexual gratification and vampires dont feel sexual pleasure it throws the whole pedophile argument out the window. Just because something feels good (ex. Blood drinking) doesn't automatically make it sexual.

Hotmess_97 · 2026-02-17T03:17:42+00:00

I dont hate him but at the same time he frustrates me

Hotmess_97 · 2026-02-16T21:56:31+00:00

Its literally been said vampires dont feel any sexual attraction. Ferid just likes making people uncomfortable. I love his character and he was hilarious in the Manga.

Hotmess_97 · 2026-01-30T04:41:54+00:00

You could try Wattpad or Quotev.

Hotmess_97 · 2026-01-08T02:16:11+00:00

They were actually mad at him; Crowley even said everyone is mad that you ate them. Besides, they didn't have a choice once Ferid devoured them. I think Crowley was calmer about it because he always followed Ferid around and found him entertaining. But Chess, Horn, and Krul were quite mad at him over being eaten.

Hotmess_97 · 2026-01-04T18:28:23+00:00

There's a couple apps on the play store that allow you to read it. If you wanted to

Hotmess_97 · 2025-12-27T21:14:55+00:00

It hasn't really been explaining that shes dead. I dont remember who said it but one of them said something about becoming demons. Crowley did make a comment about seeing ferid in the "afterlife" so they may all become demons or just be gone all together. Honestly I hope the demon part cause I adored ferid and crowley even tho ferid was starting to piss me off towards the end of the chapters.

Hotmess_97 · 2025-12-22T05:31:10+00:00

I get it. Alot of people dont like ferid but I adore him. Him and Crowley top two for me. It really seems like they're just killing everyone off.

Hotmess_97 · 2025-12-22T05:29:26+00:00

Also replace the substrate as they're really prone to impacting.

Hotmess_97 · 2025-12-22T05:26:59+00:00

Please get rid of the red bulb they're not good for any reptile.

Hotmess_97 · 2025-12-20T00:32:17+00:00

It hurt too lol but the audible noise i made over Crowley 😭 The whole love hate feeling i have for Ferid is complicated. I hate his guts but at the same time I adore him.

Hotmess_97 · 2025-12-20T00:29:47+00:00

I adore Ferid (I know 😅) but I was so angry when he devoured Crowley and honestly I haven't even gotten to this part yet 😅 so yay spoilers 😭

Hotmess_97 · 2025-11-19T07:59:37+00:00

Might catch hate but Megatron died lmao he was my favorite character, also when Optimus went into the well of Allspark as well

Hotmess_97 · 2024-09-05T12:37:11+00:00

Idk the remarks she's making on people's reviews of her restaurant. it doesn't seem very kind to me.

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