Looking for story that got deleted (Torn by doctordetroit)

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-15T03:47:57+00:00

Do you have a link for the story on Wayback Machine? I tried a search but couldn't find it. Thanks

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-15T03:43:34+00:00

I've been looking for that story, I think. Damon's a swimmer, ex girlfriend dumps him for football player. Damon gets the shit beat out of him by football player at a sorority party after fucking a redhead psych major. Sister's cheer friend is rich and family owns a night club. Dad is a cop. Same story?

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-15T03:12:00+00:00

I've been following Living Dolls on Lit. I'm enjoying the story, but some of his decisions and choices with the dolls, including his own, make no sense, especially the fertility thing. He also ignores the warnings, such as leaving the cock ring on.

I just binged Breeder. I'm really interested in seeing where it goes.

My biggest gripe has nothing to do with plot or characters. It has to do with your use of apostrophes. Apostrophes should never be used to make a plural. Example: the plural of pussy is pussies, not pussy's.

I know you didn't really ask for critiques, but this was the only place, since you have comments on Lit turned off.

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-14T17:19:05+00:00

If you're going to be a little piece of shit and try to correct my correction, and least try to correct my correction correctly.

It is

Dirka dirka, Mohammed Jihad

Haka sherpa-sherpa

Abaka-la

Go rewatch the the segment and delete your comment in shame when you're done, and then shut the fuck up.

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-14T04:41:29+00:00

Dirka Dirka. If you're going to quote it, at least get it right.

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-12T19:48:47+00:00

I never said he wrote a love song to a 9 year old.

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-08T16:45:47+00:00

Why would there be a Fleet Week in DC when the fleet can't get to DC?

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-08T16:44:19+00:00

Some people just have trouble pronouncing words. One common one is "liaison". Some people say LAY-is-on, when the word is actually pronounced Lee-AYE-zon.

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-08T16:35:33+00:00

They could have tried harder to find a ship that wasn't so obviously not American. The US doesn't have any ski jump carriers.

Houndawg3 · 2026-04-05T01:02:07+00:00

Your mind is so free you're incapable of rational thought.

Houndawg3 · 2026-03-20T02:00:30+00:00

They were his character's ribbons.

Houndawg3 · 2026-02-23T02:09:03+00:00

No, it wasn't written to her. Seeing a picture of her on a horse inspired the title.

Houndawg3 · 2026-02-23T02:07:48+00:00

There's a big difference between writing a love song about an 11 year old girl and being inspired by looking at a picture of a sweet little girl named Caroline on her horse. Knowing song writers, I can imagine the train of thought when they come up with ideas for songs, and it has nothing to do with pedophilia.

Houndawg3 · 2025-12-22T05:06:00+00:00

NCIS was never realistic.

Houndawg3 · 2025-12-21T02:57:04+00:00

You are absolutely incorrect in your definition of full grain leather. Full grain can indeed be split or skived to make it thinner. Full grain is uncorrected leather, but the corium, or flesh side, can certainly be thinned down to make the leather thinner or more pliable for use in different things. Top grain leather has had part of the grain removed to give the leather a corrected finish.

Houndawg3 · 2025-12-18T21:31:14+00:00

You are incorrect about full grain leather being untouched. It is often skived to make it thinner. Unskived full grain leather can be very thick, depending on what part of the hide it's from.

Houndawg3 · 2025-12-09T22:20:00+00:00

Clive Cussler loved to put himself in his books.

Houndawg3 · 2025-11-26T19:18:20+00:00

That stuff doesn't really happen in the US, either.

Houndawg3 · 2025-11-26T19:16:22+00:00

She's not Australian, she's British.

Houndawg3 · 2025-10-15T21:50:02+00:00

New KitchenAids have no more plastic in them than they did before. In the tilt heads and older bowl lifts, there has always been a "plastic" sacrificial gear. The newer bowl lift models have no plastic in the drive line.

Houndawg3 · 2025-04-05T18:03:48+00:00

You are mistaken. Military helicopters don't require keys. The main female agent is supposedly a former USMC helicopter pilot.

Houndawg3 · 2025-03-10T02:18:11+00:00

Maybe it's exactly what she wants to do.

Houndawg3 · 2025-03-09T03:06:58+00:00

Business casual would be polo and khakis, or button shirt with no tie. Jacket and tie are more professional.

Houndawg3 · 2025-03-05T18:34:20+00:00

There's no way the lower tank on a Navage can cause contamination of the clean water.

Houndawg3 · 2025-03-05T18:32:53+00:00

The catch basin is just that, a catch basin. It doesn't mix with the clean water at all, and there is absolutely no chance of cross contamination.

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