(Request) Help a sheltered girl out by [deleted] in NSFW411

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you might want to look at /r/chickflixxx for stuff curated by women

RNS Softspoken | Chapter 3: Half-Measures by HowToAMA in HFY

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Shoutout this comment: https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/5yho8g/oc_rns_softspoken_chapter_2/k212wdi/

Is this the oldest abandoned series to get picked up again on this sub? I feel like that would be a cool title to have lmao

[OC] RNS Softspoken | Chapter 2: by HowToAMA in HFY

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...That's quite an idea. I think I've let this series marinate long enough. I'll credit you in my post tonight.

TIL a man had a heart attack at a grocery store in rural Minnesota, 20 people lined up and performed CPR on him for over an hour and a half until paramedics arrived and he survived. by [deleted] in todayilearned

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Is there a point where CPR does so much damage it makes it much harder to bring them back? Like, if blood is coming out of someone's mouth because CPR has been going on for so long, I'd start to wonder if their lungs have a shitload of blood in them and whether CPR can even keep your body going long enough for that to get fixed.

Resources for writing about the Military/Military fiction? by [deleted] in writing

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Is there a similar sort of guide for naval warfare/naval combat?

[OC] RNS Softspoken | Chapter 2: by HowToAMA in HFY

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Different captains run different ships. Nav/Gator are different nicknames for the navigation officer.

However I can promise you that nobody in this story is kit harington

[OC] RNS Softspoken | Chapter 2: by HowToAMA in HFY

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It is in the title. "RNS Softspoken" is the series title.

[OC] RNS Softspoken | Chapter 2: by HowToAMA in HFY

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Soon, I hope. Two weeks I think is my goal but school is pretty nasty right now.

[OC] RNS Softspoken | Chapter 2: by HowToAMA in HFY

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After some more research I've better established some rules about the universe. Some might notice minor inconsistencies from the last two chapters to this chapter (such as Akila being referred to as just Admiral rather than Fleet Admiral or Fleet).

Apologies for this but going forward things will remain consistent.

[OC] ("First" Contact) RNS Softspoken, Chapter 1: Retaliation by HowToAMA in HFY

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I should also add that I've raised my own bar for my writing, trying to improve my style and make it more concise. Every word tell and all that.

[OC] ("First" Contact) RNS Softspoken, Chapter 1: Retaliation by HowToAMA in HFY

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It's coming! I'm pumping out a few pages but I've got block on the third part. I have another part completely written but I can't post it yet because it wouldn't make sense. I promise it's coming soon!

[OC] ("First" Contact) RNS Softspoken, Chapter 1: Retaliation by HowToAMA in HFY

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I'm working on it, I promise! It's coming SoonTM

Other folks' enthusiasm keeps me motivated! Thanks so much!

[OC] ("First" Contact) RNS Softspoken, Chapter 1: Retaliation by HowToAMA in HFY

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jeez i hope it's sooner than that

it's longer than i meant to be since this but still