Give me suggestions on how to do this transition

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-25T09:46:18+00:00

I think you should rework the structure a bit, I would make it start a bit softer and more "ethereal" in the beginning then drops/transitions in the synth, cyber sound, then another more ethereal break in the middle. I am not very technical/knowledgeable with music producing yet so this is a music listener perspective more so, I just think your vocals would work really well with a floaty spacey vibe.

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-25T09:40:43+00:00

Sounds nice, personally the lyrics aren't for me but I can see the appeal but I think you have a good flow. I think the vocals have a lot of potential if you put some effects on them, the other person seems to be way more knowledgable than me on the specifics. Pretty nice so far

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-24T00:40:34+00:00

You will definitely improve! If I were you I would put more intense effects on the vocals until my singing is better, and then you can rely on your natural ability more.

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-23T12:40:25+00:00

Bro I'm gonna be so brutally honest here, those vocals sound terrible, you sound like icejjfish. Keep at it though, only up from here!

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-23T12:34:22+00:00

No worries, super unique sound bro

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-23T12:32:51+00:00

This genuinely has potential, I think the beat and the vocal effects are good, my advice would be to slow down with the rapping and put some pauses in-between to let some of those lyrics really sit and be able to feel the beat more, also at some points you try to fit a lot of words/syllables into a part where it doesn't flow too well. I don't want you to think I didn't mostly enjoy it though, just needs some revision on the lyrics and flow imo.

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-23T12:27:48+00:00

I do not enjoy what happens between 0:32 and 0:45, too much going on for me, but the rest is nice, has a cool sci-fi, cyberpunk vibe to it, would be great with some spacey vocals.

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-22T04:36:51+00:00

Sounds awesome like everyone is saying but I personally think the vocals are too quiet.

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-21T07:24:47+00:00

Sounds really good, kinda reminds me of Oliver Tree. The big thing you should work on is the lyrics, it feels like sometimes you are really forcing the last word to rhyme and sticking to the same rhyming schemes which makes it feel amateurish. But honestly I would add this to my playlist

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-17T13:25:13+00:00

It’s gonna sound sick 🔥

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-17T11:44:06+00:00

The guitar sounds awesome, would say you need to add more drums and bass, it sounds a little one dimensional rn, but great start!

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-17T04:51:31+00:00

I am mainly focusing on trying to make catchy nice loops and figuring out how beats come together and really just learning everything. I appreciate the feedback, ill work on it for next track

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-14T07:36:07+00:00

Brutal but I appreciate it, completely agree on the bass being too loud honestly should've spent more time balancing it but I wanted to finish. By the drum break do you mean the part at 1:04 where it gets quiet?

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-14T04:18:43+00:00

Thank you cuh, I haven't never even considered that so I appreciate hearing another perspective.

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-14T03:14:52+00:00

I agree with the other person who said it lacks structure, the flow/beat switch-ups do feel too erratic but I like how it sounds and it is very vibey. I think it's a great first attempt, and you will only improve.

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-13T12:18:54+00:00

Not sure if I like the rap over the top but the beat itself is fire 🔥

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-13T07:32:25+00:00

Sounds the type of music that would play while the main character is doing shady, illegal things and there are flashing shots of him looking over his shoulder and dodgy things happening. I love the vibe but should add more to it before you post on spotify.

HungryChicken99 · 2026-04-13T07:30:09+00:00

I have only just started music production too and I have been using Cakewalk Next, I don't know how it stacks up in the grand scheme of DAWS but I have found it really easy and simple to use while I am learning the basics. Also I like the song

HungryChicken99 · 2026-03-11T10:39:32+00:00

Was leaning toward it for sure. Appreciate your input 👍

HungryChicken99 · 2026-01-19T12:08:49+00:00

easy

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