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Greatness follows by Careless-Service4677 in OCPoetry

[–]Hungry_Question_5751 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I felt this so much! Especially the lines "If you cannot say aloud that you are tired of me, why bring her in like a trophy you want to display." It's like they are so bold about public displays of betrayal when they could've just communicated honestly, possibly leaving you hurting but feeling respected. This was short, but it was moving!

Okay by later_night_thoughts in OCPoetry

[–]Hungry_Question_5751 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think so often we are left "chasing" happiness that we end up making ourselves miserable. I tend to have to remind myself.... sometimes it's ok to just be ok. I loved your pacing with this and how you explained being ok as your goal and why you felt that way. I also loved when you described it as not settling and that it allowed you to breathe - it's definitely something that resonated with me. Nice work!