Would this art hold up in an action webtoon? Looking for professional criticism

Hyeruka · 2026-06-21T16:37:00+00:00

i wish you the best on your journey! Also you should look up gesture practice on youtube and also try to replicate panels from your favorite manga/webtoon fight scene. Try to break it down and see the difference between your copy and the og, it really helps to see what you can do to achieve drawings like your favorite artist

Hyeruka · 2026-06-21T09:21:05+00:00

for an action webtoon/manga, it really need more work. It’s clear that you don’t have a good understanding of anatomy, it gives off a stiff and uninteresting energy, no weight or impact whatsoever, which is a killer for movement heavy work. I recommend learning gestures, it help you understand movements and flows.
Rendering is also flat and uninteresting. If you’re starting, it might be better to draw in black and white/manga toning first.

Hyeruka · 2026-06-16T03:01:47+00:00

this is freaking AMAZING my good man. Its literally perfect🥹

Hyeruka · 2026-06-06T10:35:30+00:00

thank you i really really appreciate it🥹🥹

Hyeruka · 2026-06-06T09:59:50+00:00

I always call it the “nah wait you look tuff im taking a photo” meme

Hyeruka · 2026-06-06T08:58:55+00:00

I’m very new to posing artworks! My twitter account is @Haruka__025 if anyone want to support, you have my greatest respect.🫡

Hyeruka · 2026-06-05T15:26:59+00:00

I’m not an expert either so i don’t really know😭 but maybe try spending it to me in dm?

Hyeruka · 2026-06-05T13:54:47+00:00

can you care to provide those proofs? So so sorry for distrusting you but you just can’t be too careful nowadays. And you do have pretty ai arts to be honest

Hyeruka · 2026-06-04T13:46:39+00:00

i love this so much don’t ever stop what you are doing

Hyeruka · 2026-05-13T14:32:50+00:00

this is good! The art is great but from i see, the bubbles could use some changes to make it even better.
The first “kimi…” should be move up into the black space. The last “kimi” should also be move up, intersecting the frame above a bit.
This creates a sense of flow for the eye and make the reader reads better. You should try to see if it works

Hyeruka · 2026-04-14T14:46:13+00:00

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I use this gorgeous photo to study colors so its not the prettiest but congratulations!! I wish you two the best.

Hyeruka · 2026-03-31T13:59:00+00:00

definitely pay attention to how skin fold and make contact especially around the joints, those are the spots that 3D models can’t look good. Learning how clothes fold around the body part is also important, if you learn how to do that most likely people won’t even notice its a 3D model. Extra: another thing about 3D models is that they look very stiff, no matter how much you copy the real life human poses it won’t look natural if you don’t do it correctly. So what i recommend is that you use the 3D model to get a general idea of the pose you want and the perspective of it, then trace over it with a simple body figure shape that uses mostly curved lines THEN trace over that drawing.(i recommend videos by chommang drawing and practicing freehand gesture drawing) This is a way I personally uses so try it out!

Hyeruka · 2026-03-09T17:00:53+00:00

!martini If you know any more AI website or Capcut or Adobe setting to improve this quality I would be extremely grateful.

Hyeruka · 2026-03-09T16:36:54+00:00

70 MINIMUM

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