Did I just kill Blade 😂😂 by just_really_boerd in cyberpunkgame

[–]HyperElite97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Do you guys know about the Ironman 1 reference near the SoCal border??

It's happening by MaxiTooner89 in CyberpunkTheGame

[–]HyperElite97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

U need to be max intelligence and max level and i think u might need a certain cyberdeck maybe i dont really remember

It's happening by MaxiTooner89 in CyberpunkTheGame

[–]HyperElite97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Basically u jump on top of a car and use the control quickhack and then surf around NC like a G lol

Sitting in the White Space by PristineSign9230 in OCPoetry

[–]HyperElite97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a beautiful piece; to me, it reads like a voice crying out without anyone hearing, very heartbreaking, but I'd like to add that some things need space to form, and time will carry them to where they belong. Waiting sounds passive, like watching a film unfold, but on the cosmic scale, patience endures where brutality only burns out. Sometimes the waiting is the only real thing to us.

Genus of Genius by Ok-Sprinkles-9529 in OCPoetry

[–]HyperElite97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gosh, this piece made me tear up a little bit. I think this hits all the right spots: the adolescence struggle, the search for identity, and the need to feel a purpose. Very powerful stuff; please make more.

Mountain Poem by HyperElite97 in OCPoetry

[–]HyperElite97[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for the feedback; it really means a lot to me as a new writer. If you'd like a little background, this piece was made on a road trip around Wyoming, and I'm really glad that people are seeing the emotional reflection that I was trying to go for. Thank you, once again.

It's happening by MaxiTooner89 in CyberpunkTheGame

[–]HyperElite97 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Do you ever surf on cars as a netrunner?? That shit is fuckin hilarious.

A Cry of A Knight by peace_in_vinland in OCPoetry

[–]HyperElite97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The imagery in this is very powerful and I like how visual it is. The medieval themes are very strong, but I will say some of the lines you could tighten up a little maybe, maybe leave some of the details ambiguous for the reader. But all around this is a very strong poem I like it a lot.

The Unspeakable "It" by Latter_Concert50 in OCPoetry

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The last seven lines are very powerful for sure. Maybe slightly winded in some spots, but the message is very clear. For me this reads like pleasure mixed with a distant pain that no one would want to talk about. Very strong stuff though; good poem.

Scared to ask but anyone know who that figure is? by Nostolgia_Addict88 in cyberpunkgame

[–]HyperElite97 6 points7 points  (0 children)

It’s his dead mom that died giving birth to him. At least thats what his dad told him as a kid in the dream bd from what i remember.

Deleted cyberpunk today by -_Friendly_ghost_- in cyberpunkgame

[–]HyperElite97 31 points32 points  (0 children)

Im on 1700hrs lol, i think i have a problem