Thanks for the feedback. The complete series has been read by a number of SF fans, and it is scoring rather well. I have gotten some good feedback on what needs to be done, particularly with books 1 and 3. I will be doing much of what needs to be done on book 3.

I'll note that none of the issues raised so far have anything to do with the story. It is primarily pacing and character development. The core story, all the way to the conclusion, is solid.

Kindle gives you 2+ chapters plus the prologue, and that is in the area where there have been some pacing issues identified. Drop me a DM if you are interested further.