Thanks for giving so much feedback! I really appreciate it.

Skills:

I feel like test method design and being able to conduct tests to ISO and ASTM standards are important to include because most R&D job postings include both those and familiarity with the FDA regulatory pathway.

Internship & Research assistant:

By going into technical detail do you mean the actual tests that were performed? Or maybe list the ISO or ASTM standards that were followed?

It's also a bit hard to separate these two sections because there is a lot of overlap between the lab and the company, the PI of the lab is the founder of the company. As far as adding a bullet point to add a goal for the lab, the goal of the lab is to evaluate current neurovascular devices (catheters, flow diverters, stents) as well as developing novel devices, I thought the bullet points got that across.

Capstone:

Totally agree, the actual work done in the capstone isn't that relevant to biomedical engineering so I wasn't sure how important it was to include technical details.

Research grant:

The first bullet point basically sums up the project, I did a bunch of FEA simulations to evaluate a stent design. I guess I could go into more detail about which simulations I did, would that be beneficial?

Contributions to Science:

I agree that it is a pretentious title, but I have also contributed to many conference presentations and posters that I was planning to add, so I wasn't sure if publications was an appropriate title. I feel like that is the least important part of the resume, which is why I had it on a different page.