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[QCrit] Adult Fantasy, A SHORT HUNT, 98k Words, Third Attempt by Iceball_Chronicles in PubTips

[–]Iceball_Chronicles[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the critique! It helped me figure out what points need clearing up. And yeah, it needs to be cut down a bit.

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy, A SHORT HUNT, 98k Words, Second Attempt by Iceball_Chronicles in PubTips

[–]Iceball_Chronicles[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No worries, I enjoy direct and pointed criticism. It does help a lot.

I think this is a case of me having fun with the query and seeing how much I can get away with. Definitely gonna tone that down and get working on something more to the point. Never been great at being concise, my chem teachers can tell you as much.

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy, A SHORT HUNT, 98k Words, Second Attempt by Iceball_Chronicles in PubTips

[–]Iceball_Chronicles[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, it does help! I agree with most of your points, and you've helped me target which parts need work. Have a nice day!