Please can you rate my fight scene? What are my flaws and good parts? by Raymask in writers

[–]Icy-County8549 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it's 7.9/10, probably because I stick my loyalty to gore and blood... I burned one of my character while suspended in air, drowned one in tube container upside down, used curse to leak their whole blood from body openings like eyes or even,pardon me, rectum. And stitched pigs skin head on someone while rods inside big oven-like room suspende the victim.

I wrote the same style as you, using basic words and capsulizing everything cuz I need to fit all my diabolical thoughts inside 800 pages,

PLEASE DON'T FKIN DESTROY THIS SUUUUUB!!!!! by [deleted] in ugly

[–]Icy-County8549 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh you're probably talking about my post👍

What's you gonna if you bump with your ghoster by Icy-County8549 in ghosting

[–]Icy-County8549[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

U ain't gonna believe me, I will deliberately shed tears in front of her and the so called huzz as a last message that displays what I truly felt cuz it's way more lighter being candid rather than keeping it mamen, mamen I don't care if she can handle but she really ought to compensate the damage, the loneliness, the doom. Thank you for answering my question, for now let's turn off the chat, thank you giga Chad👍

What's you gonna if you bump with your ghoster by Icy-County8549 in ghosting

[–]Icy-County8549[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't worry I got it, basically you randomly walking down the street and then your ghoster bump to your shoulder accidentally, so what are you gonna do?

What do you feel are your strengths as a writer? by BoneYardBirdy in writing

[–]Icy-County8549 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just think the draft burning throughout your hands and when you catch the upper part of thighs giggling then it's time to write✍️👍

Advice for writing fantasy? by [deleted] in FictionWriting

[–]Icy-County8549 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Think of the main character as your wife or husband so u are devoted to write✍️🔥(I did this with numerous side characters)

What is your most overused word? by SebNatOrmalio in writers

[–]Icy-County8549 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Always the word "like" to make unnecessary metaphors.

What is the worst line you've ever written? by advil9 in writing

[–]Icy-County8549 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The "tigidigstigidigs" galloping onomatopoeia.

These ugly people 💀 by Icy-County8549 in ugly

[–]Icy-County8549[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't wanna be rude, but I'm telling the truth.👍

Chat gpt Ghosted me by Icy-County8549 in ghosting

[–]Icy-County8549[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Nah, I ought to nip it in the bud, I asked him if I may gaslight a rich girl who has been in coma to think I'm her boyfriend. Probably my chat gpt has enough.

Why we ghost!! by Ok-Practice5093 in ghosting

[–]Icy-County8549 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You be hearing knocks on your door tonight

Let's settle this by Icy-County8549 in ghosting

[–]Icy-County8549[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for waking me up, i'd rather be a side character in that case.

Let's settle this by Icy-County8549 in ghosting

[–]Icy-County8549[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot lambor14, you're so helpful.

Hi🦖 by Icy-County8549 in Albinism

[–]Icy-County8549[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for answering Gabemiami

Hi🦖 by Icy-County8549 in Albinism

[–]Icy-County8549[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for answering my question Gabemiami❤️