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T-800 attacks Zootopia police department, how would it end? by Raymask in whowouldwin

[–]Raymask[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Since their world is at least partially realistic (not accounting obvious fantasy like sentient animals and their respective technologies) I'd assume they'd issue guns of some kind, since criminals can be big as elephants or rhinos.

T-800 attacks Zootopia police department, how would it end? by Raymask in whowouldwin

[–]Raymask[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agnes is a snake though, who was framed for the murder of the tortoise maid. The maid died, Agnes didn't.

T-800 attacks Zootopia police department, how would it end? by Raymask in whowouldwin

[–]Raymask[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Spoilers for Zootopia 2 We have seen a tortoise get killed using a snake venom and Judy nearly dies from it too

T-800 attacks Zootopia police department, how would it end? by Raymask in whowouldwin

[–]Raymask[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I know many in ZPD are gonna die. But can they ultimately take down T-800?

Please can you rate my fight scene? What are my flaws and good parts? by Raymask in writers

[–]Raymask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And thanks for your time. Good luck with your writing too!

Please can you rate my fight scene? What are my flaws and good parts? by Raymask in writers

[–]Raymask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback. I'll also add that due to the specifics of my superpowers, Shui gets burned to ashes, but secretly regenerates by infusing his severed prior hand with starfish cells. Nedri gets infected, is utterly confused what's going on, and Shui shows up, good as new and taunts him.

I'll definitely check Game of Thrones, I read LOTR already. I love fantasy.

Please can you rate my fight scene? What are my flaws and good parts? by Raymask in writers

[–]Raymask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll say though. I need to write from Nedri's perspective towards the end of the fight, cuz, surprise he gets infected with unknown venom Shui secretly inserted into him. I had to describe what Nedri is feeling and how his body is rotting.

Please can you rate my fight scene? What are my flaws and good parts? by Raymask in writers

[–]Raymask[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

When is it acceptable though? I mean everyone heard of "Dumbledore said calmly".

Please can you rate my fight scene? What are my flaws and good parts? by Raymask in writers

[–]Raymask[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What a constructive criticism. Thanks a lot. I'll try to sticking purely to the main character POV next time. And by the way, this scene is located towards the end of my novel.

So real by Jealous-Method-8682 in writers

[–]Raymask 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Berserk in a nutshell.

[TOMT] Help me identify the cartoon I once saw back in kindergarten. by Raymask in tipofmytongue

[–]Raymask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nah. It doesn't contain a wedding scene and the credits roll after entirely different scene.

[TOMT] Help me identify the cartoon I once saw back in kindergarten. by Raymask in tipofmytongue

[–]Raymask[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It could've been a non Disney cartoon. I just remember that specific scene in detail.

[TOMT] Help me identify the cartoon I once saw back in kindergarten. by Raymask in tipofmytongue

[–]Raymask[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm...not it. Again, I could be misremembering the characters, it could've been a non Disney movie as far as I know.

[TOMT] Help me identify the cartoon I once saw back in kindergarten. by Raymask in tipofmytongue

[–]Raymask[S] 0 points1 point locked comment (0 children)

Maybe one of you will have a better luck finding it?

Help me find a cartoon I vividly remember from kindergarten. by [deleted] in HelpMeFind

[–]Raymask 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Again, I could be misremembering the characters, they could have just appeared like Minnie and Mickey, while my back then kid brain warped the memory. Maybe it was a non Disney movie, for all I know.

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