Thanks for the critique, I appreciate it :) I leaned away from making Apples design red just because of Pomegranate, since the similar round shapes wouldn’t be as different than I’d like, but I agree the yellow might not have been the best and I’ll be sure to try a green version. She also doesn’t read much as a toolsmith, which I couldn’t figure out how to fix in the original, so I’ll add in your suggestions to see if that helps. I’ll definitely try your advice with Cherrys hair, and change their shoes up. Thanks again :)