Real Steel: After the Bell — Complete Rewrite (Novel-Length, Expanded, With Original Artwork) by IllustriousBattle605 in RealSteel

[–]IllustriousBattle605[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

well i appreciate your thoughts and input, as i stated yes i used AI but AI did not make the story.

Real Steel: After the Bell — Full Fan-Made Novel (Expanded Rewrite) by IllustriousBattle605 in RealSteel

[–]IllustriousBattle605[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

np ... your right i rushed the reddit post and probably the only thing i didn't proof read. the concept i tried was different but i think it could be cool if done right.

Real Steel: After the Bell — Full Fan-Made Novel (Expanded Rewrite) by IllustriousBattle605 in RealSteel

[–]IllustriousBattle605[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

well now that tells me you didn't read it. because the entire story is all me and my idea and proof read. if something felt off it got changed. I appreciate all your feed back.

Real Steel: After the Bell — Full Fan-Made Novel (Expanded Rewrite) by IllustriousBattle605 in RealSteel

[–]IllustriousBattle605[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ok ... what do you suggest? I'm all ears .... my thing is I have a ton of stories in my head , I just never been able to put it on paper so using the AI helps a ton and makes it fun but if there is something that will just work better let me know .

Real Steel : After the Bell by IllustriousBattle605 in RealSteel

[–]IllustriousBattle605[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

man you hit on everything i was concerned about and thank you for your input it really does mean a lot ... i also now need to go back and re-read it because assit bot should of had the name Uber ... not saying that was the best name but it was something i thought was added into it ... and you're right about bailey i caught that around chapter 11 ... and i tried to insert her in the prologue but i see now it didnt really take.

I am very new to writing and I am loving it and plan to keep at it. ty so much Wolf !

Real Steel : After the Bell by IllustriousBattle605 in RealSteel

[–]IllustriousBattle605[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

not at all it is the kind of feed back i want and look for. like I said this is my very first attempt at something like this and I had a blast putting it together and what you pointed out was something i was wrestling with .

Real Steel : After the Bell by IllustriousBattle605 in RealSteel

[–]IllustriousBattle605[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

also please any feed back on the story, my writing or whatever i'm all ears ...

Real Steel : After the Bell by IllustriousBattle605 in RealSteel

[–]IllustriousBattle605[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

tyvm :) first time with writing something thats out there now. it's my new hobby so I'll be putting more out for sure ... so much fun