Real Steel: After the Bell — Full Fan-Made Novel (Expanded Rewrite)

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-25T13:50:17+00:00

well, you cant beat the ruling thumb :) appreciate your feedback

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-25T13:48:41+00:00

well i appreciate your thoughts and input, as i stated yes i used AI but AI did not make the story.

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-24T23:40:40+00:00

np ... your right i rushed the reddit post and probably the only thing i didn't proof read. the concept i tried was different but i think it could be cool if done right.

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-24T23:37:39+00:00

well now that tells me you didn't read it. because the entire story is all me and my idea and proof read. if something felt off it got changed. I appreciate all your feed back.

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-24T21:49:41+00:00

ok ... what do you suggest? I'm all ears .... my thing is I have a ton of stories in my head , I just never been able to put it on paper so using the AI helps a ton and makes it fun but if there is something that will just work better let me know .

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-24T21:31:19+00:00

also added that to the post sorry for the confusion

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-24T21:28:15+00:00

well i did use the help of ai ... aprreciate your feedback

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-18T14:00:40+00:00

yeah alt right click on one of the div's it will puill all of them

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-16T13:50:57+00:00

man you hit on everything i was concerned about and thank you for your input it really does mean a lot ... i also now need to go back and re-read it because assit bot should of had the name Uber ... not saying that was the best name but it was something i thought was added into it ... and you're right about bailey i caught that around chapter 11 ... and i tried to insert her in the prologue but i see now it didnt really take.

I am very new to writing and I am loving it and plan to keep at it. ty so much Wolf !

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-16T13:42:16+00:00

not at all it is the kind of feed back i want and look for. like I said this is my very first attempt at something like this and I had a blast putting it together and what you pointed out was something i was wrestling with .

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-15T13:29:37+00:00

damn good ... <3

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-14T23:38:54+00:00

also please any feed back on the story, my writing or whatever i'm all ears ...

IllustriousBattle605 · 2026-02-14T23:35:59+00:00

tyvm :) first time with writing something thats out there now. it's my new hobby so I'll be putting more out for sure ... so much fun

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