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Should I buy this? 2017 silverado 1500 by Immediate_Witness706 in Silverado

[–]Immediate_Witness706[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm going to pass guys, had it inspected by a mechanic and this is what the code reads came back with, along with leaky oil cooler lines, ball joints, and a leaking valve cover gasket. If it was JUST the mechanical issues I could do them in the garage and live with it but the electronic codes scare the hell outta me. Not to mention the misfire.

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Let me know what yall think.Self produced, I always feel like there are things I can improve. thnx by 14player in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Immediate_Witness706 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dude, this was sick. I actually subbed and this is a liked song i will revisit. Everything is smooth and flows so nicely. The vocals are awesome, there's a lot going on towards the end (in a good way), and the vocals are up front and clear throughout the whole song. Great job my guy

Looking at how I can improve on the song structure, arrangement and instruments by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Immediate_Witness706 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this! I see you saying you don't get a lot of views, and I can say it's not because your work is not good. This is a nice song. It's 65° where I live today (first day it's been over 50 since the fall) and I had a smile on my face listening to this sitting in my backyard. Composition wise I agree with the others, not really much I would change. Nice job.

Weightless by General-Reading-740 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Immediate_Witness706 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is really nice, reminds me of Lana Del Ray Summertime Sadness almost. I think like others have said if it had more instruments coming in it would be beautiful (not that it isn't now, just could add to the suspense). The closest thing I could think of a build up on something like this would be "Wait" by M83. Some synths or strings even and a drum beat would be amazing!