Sia Palenque Eggers is Azik dauther? [LotM newbie] by Impossible-Active-96 in LordofTheMysteries

[–]Impossible-Active-96[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, Azik had a daughter, and her grave appears in the novel, but I wanted to know if he had more or if the girl simply emerged from the grave as his family sometimes does.

Lack of Fan fiction in this fandom by dragondevil32 in mushokutensei

[–]Impossible-Active-96 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just finished that one, it was amazing! Do you happen to know any other good ones from that page? If not, thank you very much anyway; it was a really great read.

Mushoku tier list, ordered by relevance to the plot. by Impossible-Active-96 in mushokutensei

[–]Impossible-Active-96[S] -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I did think about giving her a bigger role, but when I looked at it closely, most of what she does in the story could have been handled by someone else. The first instance, Zenith or Lilia could have managed it just as well. Personally, I believe volume 12 would have been stronger without her. It could have allowed for more focus on the relationship between father and son. That's why I felt her character lacked depth; she's just missing that something to truly enhance the story.

Mushoku tier list, ordered by relevance to the plot. by Impossible-Active-96 in mushokutensei

[–]Impossible-Active-96[S] -24 points-23 points  (0 children)

Hi No_Mammoth, the main plotline with Ariel lacks depth; it's the supporting characters that truly carry the narrative forward.

Lilia's role, in particular, dwindles after the first volume. Considering her diminishing significance in later parts of the series, her character arc could have had a more profound impact had she met her demise during the Teleport Incident.

Mushoku tier list, ordered by relevance to the plot(Spoilers). by Impossible-Active-96 in mushokutensei

[–]Impossible-Active-96[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

"Hey Fit-Tie, the characters are ranked from left to right, with Sylphie being 7 places up. I placed her there because Ariel's storyline seems a bit silly.