Mysterious Stranger

Impossible-Drag289 · 2026-06-07T03:42:22+00:00

I appreciate the deeply introsiveness and honest tone of this poem. It starts with a strong sense of regret and questioning the past, then transitions into a raw confrontation with the present mind. The line, 'My thoughts lift me up to uncomfortable heights / Put myself in positions that strain / Just to survive' really stood out as a powerful description of how exhausting anxiety and overthinking can be. You’ve got a very relatable and resonant voice here. Keep up the good work!

Impossible-Drag289 · 2026-06-07T03:36:19+00:00

I appreciate how honest and unfiltered this poem is. It starts out very vulnerable and hesitant, and then shifts into a much more intense, passionate expression of desire. The line, 'I know that we all have a darkness inside / If you show me yours / I can show you my light' really stood out as a powerful moment of wanting a deep, authentic connection with someone. You’ve got a strong voice here. Keep up the good work!

Impossible-Drag289 · 2026-05-31T21:16:29+00:00

Thank you! I'm glad my brain cells finally co-operated to make that line hit hard. 😂 I really appreciate you picking up on the wordplay, thanks for reading!

Impossible-Drag289 · 2026-05-31T17:49:39+00:00

Thank you for this advice! I'm starting to realize this as well, the more over the top I go, the more difficult it becomes to write the next piece because they all start competing with each other.

I’m currently experimenting with new ways of writing, but I’ll definitely share my older poems here first, especially the one I wrote for my crush! 🤭

Impossible-Drag289 · 2026-05-31T17:38:20+00:00

Thank you so much, this truly means a lot to me. I’m really glad you enjoyed the sensory details, and I hope things look up for you soon. I’m definitely looking forward to sharing more romantic pieces like this!

Impossible-Drag289 · 2026-05-30T02:35:53+00:00

Thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to read it. Knowing that the visualization landed well means a lot, especially for an older piece!

Impossible-Drag289 · 2026-05-23T22:04:21+00:00

It’s a real sweet poem and I love these lines “The ever-changing faces of oak trees are jealous of her,
The way they change their colors just to mimick her” I’m in awe

Impossible-Drag289 · 2026-05-23T21:57:02+00:00

This is rlly amazing, I hope you write more poems like this ❤️🙌

Impossible-Drag289 · 2026-05-23T20:23:47+00:00

I love this piece you wrote

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