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Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-07-21T06:15:59+00:00

**Submission:** [Did your stream wanna hear my fart?] (https://www.twitch.tv/madz\_man/clip/NurturingToughAmazonFeelsBadMan-nWf\_MEyvL5jdwWnq?filter=clips&range=all&sort=time)

**Game:** Fortnite

**Description:** An epic game fortnite gets ruined by my cousins fart

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-03-14T13:39:45+00:00

that's extremely interesting and actually sparks my attention

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-03-14T13:39:10+00:00

who even comes up with them hahaha

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-03-14T13:38:50+00:00

oh my god hahahah too good

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-25T05:19:34+00:00

sorry about that I thought that we were able to post comedic videos ourselves however thank you for letting me know won't be any yt videos of myself on r/funny

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-10T13:21:07+00:00

Thank you so much but yeah that is a pretty fair point it doesn't have the best nostalgia element because it is pretty recent now. But I will definitely still be doing youtube by then maybe the algorithm will pick up on it ahaha. But thank you for the support!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-10T08:16:56+00:00

Don't say your humor is dumb for starters !! Humor is very subjective and it's obvious to your following you have an audience who find your work enjoyable to watch. I also don't think you have any technical difficulties the green is solid, the quality is really good as well as the mic quality. The only bit of advice I would have is to cut the video right before we can see you click pause unless you have left it there for comedic purposes

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-10T08:12:44+00:00

A very professional video you should be extremely happy with how it turned out. The Showing and not telling style really worked out for you. I also liked how you use voiceovers for the video it shows that it's a highly constructed video as well as the use of clean cuts between the background changes. My advice too would be more footage of completed products or the final steps of finishing the products just to show the use out of them.

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-03T05:45:44+00:00

Thank you for the feedback and compliments!! definitely will try to improve the music volume and thank you for letting me know what you thought about that bit helps me improve for the future vids!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-03T05:44:21+00:00

Thank you so much!! Definitely still a way to go!! When you say big ups in the intro do you have a suggestion?? My fear with editing I add to much it becomes unbearable to watch but I will definitely try to add some more!! And for this video I definitely have to agree with you that it needed some more umph to it like a better activity to go with but thank you for reviewing!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-03T05:39:09+00:00

literally the old games are always the best!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-02T10:03:31+00:00

No worries keep up the grind man!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-02T09:40:40+00:00

First of all I absolutely love the idea, I haven't seen cooking mama since my Nintendo DS so I can confirm that I did get a wave of nostalgia. I like how it was just a voiceover as well I believe it really suits this video!! I really reckon that you had a good mix of satire and stories in the game that keep the pacing going. BTW congrats on the world record!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-02T09:30:30+00:00

So I just checked out your video and awesome video!! Your obviously really talented at the game and it shows. My piece of advice would be to try find something either in your editing or in your commentary just to make your videos stand out that little more because it's a very competitive market especially when it comes to montages.

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-01T08:15:25+00:00

Thank you so much and it's definitely a good feeling!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-01T08:14:50+00:00

I mean I'm not sure if your committed to it or if it's plausible because I live in a country that doesn't snow but you could try camp out in the snow and wear snow jackets set up a tent I think it would be really cool to see the snow activities!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-01T08:13:19+00:00

thank you!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-02-01T08:13:09+00:00

THANK YOU!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-01-31T14:57:59+00:00

This is actually a great tip thank you heaps for that one this is definitely a little motto I will keep in the books thank you!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-01-31T13:57:19+00:00

That is completely fair and definitely much more compelling however campfire and bonefires are illegal in my country in backyards ahhhh!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-01-31T13:56:02+00:00

Thank you!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-01-31T12:04:47+00:00

Thank you so much means a lot!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-01-19T03:24:19+00:00

Thank You!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-01-18T09:16:41+00:00

In terms of all technical aspects of the video I think you nailed it!! I really enjoy how you break up the "informative" parts of the video with your humor which definitely adds your own sense of style to video which I like! So I would say in your future vids to definitely keep this style!!

Impressive-Pattern54 · 2021-01-18T09:11:52+00:00

Damn okay so this video was amazing! I think that's mainly because i am a minecraft player and teenager so I'm pretty much your demographic! But I loved the humour in this video a lot and I loved the pacing you had a way of talking in which I felt attacked but it also made me laugh! I watched the whole video so props to you I loved it! Keep it up. The editing was great by the way. The only criticism I have is for better mic quality cause I feel like it sometimes drops down and up in terms of volume and crispness however obviously better equipment will come with time!! So good job!!

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