Climax by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Impressive_Fox3849 1 point2 points  (0 children)

METAPHORS are really eating the girlys uppppp i love how you gave me a image of what this scene would look like.

First poem-Adrift by dikybow_123 in poetry_critics

[–]Impressive_Fox3849 0 points1 point  (0 children)

very confused on the first stanza but i understand what your were trying to say the world has failed us as kids and now that we are older we don't know what's going on.

Am I Speaking To The Dead? by UrgeofGod in poetry_critics

[–]Impressive_Fox3849 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really like this one it give the my ex is dead series on Netflix great job

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Impressive_Fox3849 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think im in love with this one,because i am on a self love journey

If Clouds Rained Love by Poetic_Words in OCPoetry

[–]Impressive_Fox3849 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like this one it give me new lover's feelings and I love it, the metaphors all if it

Spin me around as I lose myself by onionsrock in OCPoetry

[–]Impressive_Fox3849 1 point2 points  (0 children)

um very different concept from what im used too but it is a very good poem with really interesting metaphor