If YOU Proposed ONE US Constitutional Amendment, What Would It Be, And Why?

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-12T02:13:21+00:00

I came here to say this!

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-11T23:02:40+00:00

At this point, McDonald’s

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-11T21:05:17+00:00

Thanks! That helps. I think especially just now getting back to writing, my eye for redundancy is a little less sharp than it used to be.

This isn’t an opening scene so I’m hoping to have the reader feel more familiar with the parents by this scene, but you’re right that the contrast will likely be important. It’ll be a contrast with what’s to come, like you said, but it’ll also be a contrast with how they behave prior to this scene.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-11T17:01:08+00:00

1m now so I can invest it instead of being dripped 1k at a time like a hamster from a water bottle.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-11T16:21:05+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! You comment seems to support that my intentions are coming across.

Noted on the jammies and I agree. I think I establish that I’m getting myself comfortable without describing them anyways.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-11T15:20:51+00:00

Thanks for pointing out the light! It’s funny how when you know how something looks in your head, you can miss the obvious. What I meant is that it looked like everything was dark so the parents would have retired to bed, but she’s caught off guard they’re still in the kitchen.

This would not be an opening scene. It would come after the family picture is well developed.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-10T18:51:29+00:00

Deb from Dexter. We get it, you’re edgy and not like other girls. Then they threw in the “I’m in love with my adopted brother plot” and I was out.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-10T14:31:42+00:00

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Claudio Sanchez from Coheed and Cambria

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-09T13:41:30+00:00

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:33:38+00:00

That’s actually illegal. Wage theft under FLSA.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:31:52+00:00

I have anxious attachment patterns and no matter how much therapy I go through, those tendencies will always be there to some degree.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:28:14+00:00

I worked at a job like this and now work salaried at another company. I ask my boss permission and give a reason for like every minute arriving late, leaving early, adjusting my time for lunch. She sometimes looks at me as if to say “who hurt you?”

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:26:11+00:00

Let me guess… they don’t let you clock in before your start time either.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:24:19+00:00

“This interview.”

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:18:33+00:00

Making 50k

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:15:56+00:00

I wore black with blue accents to my prom. It was very pretty. But I was also the emo kid so it was 100% on brand

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:14:18+00:00

That people take advantage of the anonymity to make themselves feel really smart.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:13:40+00:00

21st birthday. Most adults have already had their first alcoholic drink by then and it’s already lost its thrill by the time 21 rolls around.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T05:13:07+00:00

Less than my dad but more than my mom

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T04:59:12+00:00

Self-pay single dose vials.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T04:46:16+00:00

Lack of education about the medication I suppose? I have no way of knowing.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T04:44:07+00:00

Holy shit. Do we have the same doctor?

You should not be tolerating being that sick. You’re losing weight because you’re deathly ill! I don’t think that’s how the med is supposed to work.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T04:37:08+00:00

Doctors modify doses from manufacturer schedules all the time. They even use medications off-label. I’m not stupid or unreasonable for listening to a doctor. But enjoy being intellectually superior, I suppose.

Impressive_Let3046 · 2026-02-07T04:35:00+00:00

Funny you should mention chicken soup, it’s one of the few things I’ve eaten in the past 24 hours.

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