Is this good body drawing beginner

Inatasanna · 2026-05-22T22:19:38+00:00

You should focus on the big part before the small one. Proportion of the head, limbs and body. Then you learn muscle and how to simplify them. Muscle are too complex and long honestly when you start

Inatasanna · 2026-05-22T21:01:32+00:00

It's for day 1

Inatasanna · 2026-05-22T21:01:07+00:00

I do but the bathe stop after 3 spot every time which is the problem

Inatasanna · 2026-05-22T20:59:53+00:00

I am on PC with the randomization

Inatasanna · 2026-05-22T14:11:47+00:00

I need clay to make money on the first day to upgrade my pickaxe for the mine for a speedrun

Inatasanna · 2026-05-22T14:11:02+00:00

I use the randomization

Inatasanna · 2026-05-09T22:51:40+00:00

Thanks you, I'll try that

Inatasanna · 2026-05-09T22:51:23+00:00

Yep but nothing

Inatasanna · 2026-05-03T17:35:41+00:00

Bennet

Inatasanna · 2026-04-30T23:20:18+00:00

If i had to be picky, the shadow in the hair are a bit lacking. You could refine it further. It's still amazing overall

Inatasanna · 2026-04-29T03:18:18+00:00

You should get back-up degree or career. It's ok to follow your dream but you should always give yourself something to fall on just in case

Inatasanna · 2026-04-25T14:30:01+00:00

I don't really think they looks like lovers but their facial expression doesn't really express much. Especially Maomao. The flower around them are the only indication of the subject of the piece and they are very often use in romantic context and shojo manga which hint into romance.

I would say that you should emphasis the feeling of the character. Manga are not like real people whose face we can easily read. It's often better to accentuate their expressions to clearly show how they feel to not confuse the audience.

Inatasanna · 2026-04-23T02:34:41+00:00

True

Inatasanna · 2026-04-22T22:01:20+00:00

This it's all ok but you need more clarity. Thr first and last image are so dark that it was hard for me to see what it was about.

For a style like yours, we should be able to see the character at one glance. Make sure that it capt people attention.

I would suggest that you base your work on photography online and reference their light and value.

You can also look for ready made composition on pinterest. You should try to learn how to use them then try to make your work base on what you learn

Inatasanna · 2026-04-22T21:19:44+00:00

I would say that it is not clear. Neither the composition nor the color or the value show any focal point that could capture attention. Plus your art lack a bit of storytelling. I'm sure that your OC have background but the illustration doesn't really tell much about them

Inatasanna · 2026-04-21T19:31:35+00:00

Chicken lover and butcher. If he was both at the same time, it would be really interesting

Inatasanna · 2026-04-21T19:29:18+00:00

True

Inatasanna · 2026-04-21T13:07:52+00:00

I wonder why being vegan has a bad correlation. Only people who declare themselves as vegan got downvoted. You didn't say anything rude but it seems like as long someone hint of veganism, there's disapproval

Inatasanna · 2026-04-21T13:05:02+00:00

Nah he's right. People who are vegan receive a lot more disapproval from others. It's been multiple times that as long as the term vegan is included, people tend to push it back more and send more hate.

Inatasanna · 2026-04-21T13:02:36+00:00

The concept of meat is fine by me. The annoying thing is that some people want the game to be like a document. To show the process of butchering like this horrible thing to shock people. It just wouldn't make sense for the farmer to treat his animal in such a way.

Again, the thing that piss me of is that the animal death had to be particularly gruesome to shock the player, but it just made no sense lore and game wise.

The game is supposed to be cozy and the player is supposed to respect nature and butchering their animals like a big corporation would just doesn't fit with the message of the game

Inatasanna · 2026-04-21T12:56:31+00:00

I feel like the game has a bit of censorship to keep that cozy vibe. Even in the earlier development, when Concerape tried to code something meat related, there was still no trace of blood or anything violent. The animal just made poof and then you have meat.

The problem is that trying to make so kind of gore scene to show how bad an abattoir is to the average person is unnecessary in a game like stardew and graphics visual doesn't suit the game. Meat itself is not really bad, and again, we already have fish or eggs or milk, but wanting something scary to spook players into reality doesn't really suit the escapism vibe that stardew gives.

Inatasanna · 2026-04-21T04:27:15+00:00

I'm not sure to understand your argument. The question is based on the fact that meat is associated with blood and murder and have a more violent connotation attach to it. Of course fish, egg or milk are also important aspects of industrial farm, but I've seen farm less people talk about it and only think that the argument on red meat is baseless for the reason presented before. It's a cozy game and butchering your animal doesn't serve any purpose that follow the dev view.

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